|Reviews for Sesshomaru Learns Something New and Interesting|
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 2 . 4/22
Ahh yes this was great! Glorious smexiness! Um I don't know clothing names either, but I think as long as the readers know what you're talking about it's ok. Tenses/grammar/spelling: I am actually pretty uppity on these (english was always my best subject) and you did have an occasional slip, but not bad enough to warrant a negative comment. Overall, grammar/tenses were fine, unlike some fics where it seems like the author didn't even try. Not too long, ending was good. As far as referring to them: youkai and hanyou can be mixed with demon/half-demon, older male/younger male, either one can be called lover. When they speak to each other they can say big brother/little brother (or little one) aniki/otouto and abbreviations of their names works ("Oh, Sessh!" "My little Yasha") Plus, Sesshomaru can always be referred to by his title or nicknames_"The Lord of the West" the Ice Prince, or the Killing Perfection (ex. the demon lord drove into his lover harder) these are things I use in my writing, but at the moment, they are all in notebooks since I am not quite sure how to get a story on here :) hope this helped, sorry it's long
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 1 . 4/22
I usually only review/comment after I have finished reading a fic, but I saw your author's note at the end of chapter one, and decided to make an exception. I understand about people not getting it, whether Inucest or yaoi in general. My husband doesn't understand, but he does accept my love of yaoi, especially with the gorgeous brothers. (I even got him to read one I've written) But I do not have any friends that understand. So I just wanted you to know I sympathize
| LadyEudave05 chapter 2 . 3/23/2014
the japanese word for shirt is Horai and a Yukata is like a nightgown for sleeping.
it was awsome.
| Its-Love-Not-Lust chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Yes indeed i like lol! very muchly so
| GimmePandas chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
this Kitsune loves this story very much...very much indeed _
| blankanonblah chapter 2 . 6/23/2009
This story was particularly amazing. You did a very good job I loved it.
| sweetpea12767 chapter 2 . 3/14/2009
HOLY... HOLY DAM! I just got such a major nose bleed... i swear I used 2 boxes of tissues!
| AraneaDuDios chapter 2 . 10/25/2008
| Kamorea Chan chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
i like it
| inu-dude15 chapter 2 . 7/25/2008
Awesome! I really hope you keep going with this story, or write a sequel!
| DMarieLara chapter 2 . 7/10/2008
| Madame de Coeur chapter 2 . 7/3/2008
this was funny and so ...luke...mind blowing...lol..NICE...
yes a horny demon isn't a happy demon...lol...
yea yukata is spelled right...
| Yaoiholic28 chapter 2 . 6/28/2008
| Amanda Saitou chapter 2 . 6/22/2008
Hi! I think it was a real nice end for the story, I really like that! About Inu's clothes, it's haori, if I'm not wrong... but I really don't mind much about it since what's true important for me is the plot story itself... nice work, hope to read more fics from you!
| Aoi Azarashi chapter 2 . 6/14/2008
I have to admit I was a little nervous when I started reading this fic. It's the first Inuyasha x Sesshoumaru lemon I have read and I'm still getting used to the whole incest thing. You certainly ridded me of any doubts though. Awesome story! I loved it!