Reviews for The Last Adventure
flyinhigh chapter 9 . 4/17/2008
woot! a chapter!

great chapter by the way, the ones in the middle are always the hardest to write.
RiotingREDD chapter 9 . 4/16/2008
Awesome chapter. I hit writers block on ALL my stories. Great. NIce chap... smart move for fang asking for a doctor who doesn't ask to many questions. lol. Keep updating
Makmay04 chapter 9 . 4/15/2008
A MIGGY! This excites me ]

Great chappays
cratermaker chapter 9 . 4/15/2008
ACH! I WANT TO KNOW MORE! Update, darn you... :(
flyinhigh chapter 8 . 3/29/2008
once again, great chapter! I can't wait for the update! amazing story overall...just keep writing!
The Brainless One chapter 8 . 3/29/2008
Its going kinda fast, and was it just a coinsidence that the boss for the bad guys name was the name of someone on Naruto?
RiotingREDD chapter 8 . 3/29/2008
Much Better with the paragraphs. They aren't bunched up. Nice chapter but

“What? I thought being shot hurt!”

“It will hurt. It just doesn’t yet.” I hated to scare him like that but I knew it was true.

I don't think Fang would be scared. He would be more like silent-and-not-going-to-tell-if-it-hurts-or-not-I'm-not-scared-of-anything (except losing Max) type of guy... but whatever it's cool. Really good chapter
anonymouse13 chapter 8 . 3/28/2008
Wow... Very intense. Good job :)
hitachiinAlways79 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
I hate Miggy. Therefore, hate this chapter.

anonymouse13 chapter 7 . 3/23/2008
Virtual brownies! *gasp* My favorite!

Just some notes: Twenty apples is a bit excessive. And if you really, really need to put an author's note in the middle of the story, bold it and label it as an A/N.

I suppose a rescue is coming up next! Can't wait for chapter 8...
Xxhikari-no-tenshixX chapter 7 . 3/23/2008
Awesome story! Please update again soon!~ ]
flyinhigh chapter 7 . 3/22/2008
HI! Okay, I'm done being hyper now...okay, not really but whatever...

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens! Poor Iggy...

Yeah, I don't have anything else to say, but I want to help you get 25 reviews, so...yeah.

If you want more reviews, you could try accepting anonymous ones..
RiotingREDD chapter 7 . 3/21/2008
Great chp. Yay! Brownie! You made Max like she is all the time, she hates being hopeless. Yup. YAY! OMG! I READ THE FINAL WARNING! FINALLY!
The Brainless One chapter 7 . 3/21/2008
Good luck with that goal! Poor Iggy... its kinda sad he finds out that Max like likes him than gets kidnapped. That sux!
anonymouse13 chapter 6 . 3/18/2008
*sniff* I'm loyal! I just didn't show up until... really late... Never mind. Don't worry, I'm just being obnoxious.

Very suspenseful chapter... What is Max going to do now? I hope the flock comes to the rescue...
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