Reviews for Brothers
A green eyed girl chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
i really fraking love twilight and twilight fanfiction but unlike every women (and some men in this planet) i am not in love with Edward,and sense he is a fictional character i am sure the female community can share.
PrussianKiwi chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Like it? Dude, I -loved- it! This is what I've been looking for since the damn books came out! I hope to see more from you in the future.

P.S.

You wrote that lemon as if you had been at it for years.
NeteleJala chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Very good job! I liked it, it waqs a fun little distcartion. Deffinatly out og the ordinary, but fun!
ignis crudelis chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
that was amazing!

Rough man-sex. Good stuff!

;]
XYaoiAngelX chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
That was uber hot!
Alan Wolfsheim chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
uhm, does having an orgasm count as a comment? Cuz that's kinda what happened...

I'm sorry if that's not really appropriate, but damn, I want more of these. I think I'll write one myself now. Thanks for inspiring me to write dirty gay sex smut!

YAY!
MyChemicalAlice chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
oh my fucking gosh.

that was AMAZINGLY HOT!
isacz chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
wow! I LOVE it! hahaha great job! :);):)
minipoison chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
kinda kreepy but thats why i read it! lol

jordan
Me chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
xD

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I have no clue if that was supposed to be funny, but GOD, AHAHAHAHA !
talullahh chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
holy...shit!

that was really good :D
teeheesmakemelaugh chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
o understand how guys do it, but how do girls, lesbians, do it? i dont know cause i am straight. XD
BellaLugosi chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
WHOO! *fans herself* WONDERFUL YAOI DARLING! GOOD JOB!
Ms. Topaz chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
gah! i love lemons...but what does yaoi mean? i feel stupid asking that because I know that it's connected to lemons, but I need to know!
MinniMuffin chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Awesome! XD

Will Bella find out?
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