Reviews for Harry Potter And The Elemental's Power
brighteyes343 chapter 27 . 5/24/2009
alright harry 2 better go look in his vaults and find his parents will

When will hermione learn to leave certain things alone

Is harry 1 going to cause dumbles so more grief before he leaves

Nights Silhouette chapter 27 . 5/24/2009
An ok chapter, keep it up.
jjack0310 chapter 27 . 5/24/2009
please please send them back to their world, not another alternate dimension.

and please update soon

great story
Thyrokio2 chapter 27 . 5/24/2009
Good work
riegert8 chapter 27 . 5/24/2009
Interesting chapter, To me it seem that Dumbledore is evil some times. He want to control Harry instead of working with him, I hope that Harry realize that Dumbledore care for him but just want to use him as a weapon then discard. I do mean both Harry's getting their blinder removed, that they both know that Dumbledore in both world want to use Harry
wiser harry chapter 26 . 5/10/2009
have harry take umbridge out of the ministry when he gets back and have werewolfs laws changed so that lupin can stay teaching in hogworts and have frackles humelate ron and hermione when they get back becuase they did not trust her when she said harry was not heir of slytherin and ron always saying harry is a dark wizard , what experiment was older hermione doing in the room before older harry came
DarkeAngel10 chapter 26 . 5/9/2009
This story is awesome and i love how slytherin harry is! this is great!
Darker-destiny chapter 26 . 5/8/2009
Incredible story. Few typos which are easilly ignored. Love the fact that Harry works for his power and doesnt just randomly become a master in an hour. Hope you update very soon.
DawnsRedemption chapter 26 . 5/5/2009
I think the real question is when will they go back?

If I was them I would train up in the much safer alternative universe.

Maybe that's what the letter suggested?
Wicked Lovely 17 chapter 7 . 5/3/2009
Wicked Lovely 17 chapter 5 . 5/3/2009
love it
anon chapter 1 . 5/2/2009

I like your basic story line, but I have to admit i'm getting annoyed with your oc. It feels to much like she's trying to steal the story, and basically that prevents it from being in any way a harry potter story to me, instead it's become this anonymous oc (lillian austin) story to me, which ruins it. Other than that, you've obviously got a good imagination, and a good writing technique. But it's only your new character that stops me from enjoying your story.
Davis92 chapter 26 . 5/1/2009
this is a great story

it's so much more entertaining than the story i was reading before i found it

keep up the good work

i can't wait for the next update
Katherina chapter 26 . 4/29/2009
Now I am really really lost.. What the hell happened to them? In the future they are at Potter manor or what?I would like to see a meeting between Snape and Harry in the other word,, How he would to Harry being in his house?

Please write soon..


I like the story very much!
Katherina chapter 18 . 4/28/2009
I love the history...But I think Harry is too much a shliderin..Hope you write another chapter soon bye
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