Reviews for Harry Potter And The Elemental's Power
OdilleBlack chapter 62 . 3/20
Omgg I absolutely love this story! All the plot twists, that's not something many people manage to do successfully in a fanfiction. I'm quite sure I fucked up muy French exam because I couldn't stop reading instead of studying hahahah. Well, thanks a lot! Xxx
Guest chapter 62 . 3/12
Should write a sequel
justanfanboy chapter 1 . 3/12
my godddss now reading this for the third time and only now i see this as a fucking plot twist. this chapter has nicholas en pennerelle flamel in it omg. thats fuxking awesome
somethingracist012 chapter 3 . 3/9
I feel like I'm losing brain cells trying to read this.
Madting chapter 62 . 3/4
It would be cool if you wrote another story to go with the ending of this one...
firedawg chapter 5 . 2/26
So far so good and enjoying it.
pedro chapter 62 . 2/22
nice! the best i ever read
jdhiiixc chapter 62 . 1/31
Great story
Yuunari chapter 62 . 1/25
Finally finished it and I have to say it was a long read, confusing, well written, strange and finally bloody wonderful. 8/10

At times however I found the story to be a bit tedious. What I mean by that is the fact that when you feel like you finally reach the climax it keeps escalating and escalating. It never ends and then suddenly the world is literally blown to shit. The foreshadowing is very well done in this story but I also think that some of it is unnecessary.

One thing that disappointed me though was Harry's relationship with Blaise, Draco, Hermione and Ron etc. Things aren't very elaborated when it comes to characters that were central to the story for two thirds of the book. What happened to Blaise who was basically Harry's best friend? He didn't seem overly concerned with him and what happened to the Malfoy's after their escape/capture? Sirius and Remus?

I stand by my words that this is a story worth reading and that it's very well written and planned, but what I really don't like is that you've weaved in so many characters that we grow to love and then simply discard them and don't tie up the loose ends. That is not satisfactory for the reader in the least.

Sadly I wished there was more focus on Blaise(mainly), Draco, Hermione, Sirius and Ron. You put so much effort in to their relationships and then suddenly it's totally worthless. It feels like reading two separate books.

Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed reading your story but I felt a little put out after finishing it and ended up feeling like I didn't get everything that you hinted and introduced. It was like giving us cake only to take it away after eating half of it. I hoped the epilogue would serve as the part to tie it all together, the reunion of friends and family and a bit of the aftermath of the war but instead we got something completely outlandish and, honestly, a bit pointless.
imnotraven16 chapter 62 . 1/21
awesome story
Waberjack chapter 62 . 1/21
Really amazing story loved it throughout. Especially liked how Dumbledore was such a badass considering most stories have Dumbledore as either a weakling or a senile old man and one of my favourite moments of the story was Dumbledore going back to Hogwarts and killing all the Death Eaters.

Will be favouriting this story so I can re-read it later.
Ivystrike chapter 48 . 1/9
I have to admit that when I was a few chapter in to this story, it didn't seem to be something that would interest me, and I was tempted to abandon it. But I am so glad that I ignored those initial feelings and read on. This story had developed brilliantly! It's an amazing piece and writing and I have to congratulate you on your writing skills. Thank you for taking the time to write this, and I know I will enjoy the later chapters as well as I have enjoyed this story so far!
Lord Cartwright chapter 62 . 1/8
loved the story
Sirius 92 chapter 1 . 1/3
I never really cared for Reviews nevertheless I wrote a few to encourage the author and thank him for his/ her work, which gave me a few days or even weeks of pleasure.

But your story is on a different level. I don't know what to see. I just read the last word and I cried a tear of regret, because the best story, of nearly 200 so far I read, is over.

The first words and chapters where a bit shaky but man did you lift up the spirit.

Your characterization of Harry his development and everything fades beside the great work you did with Lillian. In your story she became everything JK Rowling could ever hope for - and so much more.
Her interaction with Harry and everyone else was just marvellous and fit in the story as if she truelly belonged to the HPverse.
Personally this is the most important part of a story. The characters and their development. Everybody can write a good and gripping story. But only 1/10 can get the characters truelly working in it. And only in 1/100 you can find a story like yours where everything molded together.

There were a few lose strings at the end which you didn't elaborate (Hedwigs man/ hatchlings or the relation of Perenelle and Lillian...

But in the end it was the best fanfiction I have ever read. Although Harry Potter ended so a long time ago. Hopefully in the future there will be more stories like yours being finished.

But right know all more I can say is THANK YOU!
jorrdy12 chapter 62 . 1/2
No matter how many times i read this story, it's always a better adventure. This is simply the BEST Harry Potter story i read, very original too! Great Job! :D
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