|Reviews for Harry Potter And The Elemental's Power|
| milamber83 chapter 28 . 1/26
The supreme mugwump is title of ICW and this chapter, when we are talking about Wizengamot, Dumbledore's title should Chief Warlock.
| Natsirt2610 chapter 57 . 1/25
I love this story. It's brilliant. Pls update soon!
| BKL8008 chapter 43 . 1/24
I thoroughly enjoyed the carnage, and Harry's reaction. Perfect.
| BKL8008 chapter 42 . 1/24
Dragons? How interesting! Can't wait to see how this turns out.
| BKL8008 chapter 41 . 1/24
Honestly, I don't find this Voldemort hard to accept.
The best part of this chapter so far, though, was the interaction between Harry and Blaise. It seems that Harry can feel something good after all.
| BKL8008 chapter 39 . 1/24
Cool back story!
| Guest chapter 34 . 1/24
Poor Harry. Puberty kicking in, and the hot chick tells him his lips are cold! What a downer. Well, at least Blaise still has his balls...
Seriously, though, at least he's still Harry's friend. I have a feeling that's going to come in handy. Probably the first time they actually even did anything like shake hands, wasn't it?
I liked how you got Hermione into this one, too. I can't say I enjoyed the interlude into "canon world", but I can see why you needed it. I also like the hints you've left that this Harry 'can' be happy and feel joy, such as with Sirius, although I'm sure he'd never outright hug him or tell he loved him.
| BKL8008 chapter 28 . 1/24
Great twists! I find it much more interesting than canon.
I always wondered if JKR wasn't hinting that Voldemort might be a eunuch. High pitch voice, laughter, a weedy build, all the symptoms of pre-pubertal castration are there, too - testosterone deprivation and all. I loved the line about his ridiculously small penis! All in all, a great plot and the crossover was a wonderful touch!
| BKL8008 chapter 15 . 1/23
Vanish Blaise's balls! Excellent! He should have done it and told him he could then sing better.
I do like what you've done with Blaise here, although I'm a bit confused about his "dad". Dad#8? Or did his mom not kill his real dad? Anyhow, let me know! Wonderful work.
| BKL8008 chapter 13 . 1/23
Hands down, pop the cork and smash the bottle, the BEST blow-out and beat-down of Dumbledore I have ever read! And the old man deserved every word of it! I HATED canon Dumbledore, and how Harry just worshiped the man who had ruined his life. How stupid was canon!Harry? Very! And here it all blows out, as it SHOULD HAVE in the books! Damn, I wish I had written something like this...
I am simply in awe of this chapter.
It's also nice that Harry here has shown some emotion, that he is close to breaking down. Canon portrays him as a bit too much of a "superhero". With all this revelation? And with everyone in his world, it seems, out to hurt him, wow...I can only imagine what is to come.
One critique: I am getting confused with Lillian, Mary, Austin, and caught a few misplaced pronouns too. It would be easier to give her a name and stick with it.
| BKL8008 chapter 12 . 1/23
Flat out loved it!
Only critique, we could have done a touch more with the snake. Good bit, though.
| BKL8008 chapter 10 . 1/23
Great twists here in this exciting AU! Still enjoying it after 6 hours...
| BKL8008 chapter 8 . 1/23
Nice adaptation. I like how you handled the ending.
| BKL8008 chapter 7 . 1/23
Thoroughly enjoyed Harry's reaction to the mirror here.
I'm going to be honest as well - I find Mary annoying. I think we could have done without introducing this new OC, but it's your story. Which, I am enjoying, don't get me wrong! It's intelligent and a good look at 'what might have been'. I also like that Harry hasn't bonded with Hagrid - or anyone else for that matter. Again, not to be overly critical, but I do very much like this foul-mouthed little Asshole!Harry you have here.
| BKL8008 chapter 5 . 1/23
Although I don't agree with all the changes here, overall, I think this is a more accurate representation of how Harry would have turned out. You can't expect a child treated as he was to turn out even half or less normal. The crown jewel so far was his "Bye, bitches!" to the Dursleys. Loved it! There's a lot here to like, too. I do enjoy AU Slytherin!Harry stories, when they're well done. Yours seems to be. Definitely going to be followed. I can't say enough good things about it, and the little nits I have with it are trivial and of a personal nature, so they'd do ruin it at all. Onward and upward!