Reviews for S1 Episode 01: Black Conscious
longlostalbax chapter 16 . 1/2/2010
Anywayy gonna go read the others now :)
longlostalbax chapter 15 . 1/2/2010
Love this :)! Really enjoyed it you write the doctor really well alot of fics are nothing like him. And I like the plot you should write for them now Russell's left :( I wouldn't be as sad knowing someone who wrote this was doing it lol
deaths-master chapter 16 . 1/9/2009
all i have to say is...LOL

deaths-master
Seiya's Star chapter 15 . 1/9/2009
Oh WOW! That was BRILLIANT!

Now I see why so many reviewers and stuff were asking about whether Ashley would be coming back when they reviewed your series 2 chapters! Now I'm wondering the same thing! Ashley is cool too! She reminds me a lot of Rose in how he reacts around her and acts with her and stuff! She could probably break his shell just like Rose did...

I hope you continue with this story line too...

You are really quite BRILLIANT!
Seileach chapter 16 . 1/9/2009
This was great! :) I'm definitely going on to read the rest of your work.
Seileach chapter 7 . 1/9/2009
Hi! This story is great so far; the opening scene in the pub was fantastic. I have a question re: Ch. 6: when I go to that chapter, all I get is the first paragraph, the rest is blank and there's not even a "Review this Chapter" link at the bottom. Maybe it got cut off when you re-wrote and re-posted? Anyway, I'd like to read the rest of it sometime. Thanks!

On to the rest of this great story!
Geriatric Yoda chapter 15 . 12/2/2008
Hah, I don't need to tell you I want you to continue as I have at least a dozen more episodes to get through! Huzzah!

Dave
Geriatric Yoda chapter 14 . 12/2/2008
Great little chapter here - lots of running and lots of danger!

Dave
Geriatric Yoda chapter 13 . 12/2/2008
I didn't think I'd have to mention the language before, but after that little tirade from Ashley...

Yeah, just be aware that altough you've rated this T, most readers won't stop to look at it if its a fanfic of their favourite family show. So maybe you should add language warnings in the summary...?

Great nevertheless!

Dave
Geriatric Yoda chapter 12 . 12/2/2008
Oh, Ashley has plenty of time to know that the Doc never breaks his promises...

Great chapter, and awesome reveal!

Dave
Geriatric Yoda chapter 11 . 12/2/2008
This was a really good part, lots of 10'isms. Just one question - those spider-bots, are they the same as the ones in the episode "The End of the World"?

Dave
Geriatric Yoda chapter 10 . 12/2/2008
Now, I betting it's either the brainstealer guy or - on a wild guess - the Master.

But the whole mind-reading bit makes me shift towards the former.

Dave
Geriatric Yoda chapter 9 . 12/2/2008
Oh, man I laughed so hard at the X-Files jokes!

Dave
Geriatric Yoda chapter 8 . 12/1/2008
So, this BLFC...they give the world mindwiped humans as slaves or something? Creepy...

Gardner sounds like a nasty piece of work already!

Dave
Geriatric Yoda chapter 7 . 12/1/2008
Okay, I'm guessing these guys aren't UNIT, otherwise they'd probably recognise the Tardis, or at least realise what it is from tales passed down from soldiers before...what, then?

Hm...

Dave
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