Reviews for dialogue as a diagram of a play for blood
Lady Faucheur chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
It was difficult to read seeing as the whole thing was one giant sentence with way to many ands, no capitals and poor grammar.

If you got a beta then your work would improve ten fold.

Good idea, though. I read it four times 'till I understood it all - and liked the plot.
White Stone chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
That was so dark it made me shiver.

That episode was great. Was I the only one who felt sad by it?
Shiro Ryuu chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
*shiver* Left me a bit shell-shocked. I was wondering how you'd respond to that episode, and you've risen to the challenge amazingly...