Reviews for Brightest In The Sky
TheSolitaryNoodle chapter 9 . 4/18/2008
Aw. This story just gets better and better! I'm so glad it's on my favs.

I love the relaionship beween the cousins, it's really cute. And for some reason, I loved the grilled cheese bit.

Bella-boo's missing her master, poor widdle thing. [

BLACKCEST RULES! You wrote the Blackcest scene very realisticly, and you got their feelings down very well.

I LOVE the whole hint about 'Tom'. Very powerful! ]

Sorry about late review AGAIN, but I was on holiday with no internet. But, you have your review now, so...

Update soon!

Ellie x
Lamia of the Dark chapter 9 . 4/14/2008
so now I'm a lady? srsly, you wrote my name as ladycatfish27. Not that I'm complaining, lol! This chapter had a really slow pace and a few typos, but it was pretty good. I liked the part where she shared her sandwich with Sirius, that was cute.
TheSolitaryNoodle chapter 8 . 4/3/2008
Well whats this? A chapter I haven't reviewed? Must fix that...

*round of applause* Another brilliant chapter. The relationship between Siri and Bella is very realistic, in a kind of... unrealistic way. I'm talking gibberish, yes?


I love the way you portray Bella in this. As, not a murdering psychopath (sp?), but as a woman with feeling and a heart. I like that. ]

I'm very sorry about the late review; my cousins have come over from America and then my Uncle died, so I've had a lot on my hands...

Keep with the Bellamort. Bellamort is good, in a kind of... sadistically evil sort of way...

You seem like a very nice person. Sorry, I just had to get that in somewhere...

Another long review- sorry. In real life I never stop talking. But you like long reviews, yes?

Ellie x
Lamia of the Dark chapter 8 . 4/1/2008
ahahaha, she has to wear Sirius's clothes... that made me laugh.

I guess a little slash between minor characters wouldn't bother me, since you asked so nicely, lol. If you can manage it, how about some loving for Sirius by someone other than Bella?
Katia chapter 8 . 3/31/2008
Another excellent chapter! And while I think it is very cool that you are looking for reader imput, I just wanted to remind you that you don't have to listen to us. I for one am not going to stop reading your awesome story if you completely ignore us.

Seriously though, I think this is my favorite story in the HP fandom right now.
katia chapter 7 . 3/26/2008
first off, kudos on the super fast update. loved it!

second, woo hoo for reader imput! i guess there isn't really anything that comes to mind as far as what i need to see, but i will say that i'm rather fond of blackcest. also it might be cool to remus and tonks.
TheSolitaryNoodle chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Oh, yeah, and as for the question you put in the chapter 7 starter thingy, I thnk more Bella/Sirius would be good, along with Bella/Voldy.

TheSolitaryNoodle chapter 7 . 3/26/2008
Oh wow.

This plotline is not what I expected; it's even better! Bella's on the run from the Dark Lord... now there's a thought.

This story is just so... so... I can't thnk of a word good enough for it. It's... fantazmagazzle. (?)

Thanks for reviewing my stories, by the way!
Lamia of the Dark chapter 7 . 3/26/2008
I shall anxiously await await the next chapter.

to answer some of the questions you asked at the beginning: no slash, please. I have no pairing suggestions for minor characters except don't be afraid to go for non-canon pairings if you should so desire.
Lamia of the Dark chapter 6 . 3/26/2008
Is it wrong for me to have enjoyed reading the torture scene?
Lamia of the Dark chapter 5 . 3/26/2008
OH NOES she's being evil
Lamia of the Dark chapter 4 . 3/26/2008
This chapter had some nicely-placed humor. I especially like the part where Dumbledore said "There are no Death Eaters in my closets, I assure you." lol. what a liar!
Lamia of the Dark chapter 2 . 3/25/2008
so sad, so dark... I am intrigued. The lack of capitalization thoughout really sets the tone.
Lamia of the Dark chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
this is interesting... and kind of disgusting...
TheSolitaryNoodle chapter 6 . 3/24/2008

Sorry I haven't reviewed for a while, like you I was 'trapped in hicktown with no internet'.

I see what you mean about the lower case thing... it's not bothering me, sorry if you thought that... I was just curious.

I love the little quotes at the start of each section. Where are they from? Did you make them up?

You update REALLY fast.

I've just noticed exactly how little reviews you have for this, and it's quite amazing. You have a brilliant plotline, and you're a very good writer. This should be a really popular story...

Both of these relationships are very realistic. Voldemort is perfectly in character.

Could you please check out some of my stories? And sorry if this review s overly lengthy.


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