Reviews for Hakumei
Dancert chapter 33 . 1/26
A nice story and an interesting way to rewrite the story.
Thank you for your hard work
MrDisplay chapter 5 . 1/26
Man you got me crying
Kido Kage chapter 1 . 12/28/2022
I hope you realize the only reason i'm giving this story a shot is cuz i sense Danzo Bashing, cuz fuck him
dorothy.nediak chapter 8 . 12/10/2022
Love this quote:

"Sakura, if you don't punch them into next Wednesday, Sasuke will reduce them into charred remains, Hinata and Neji will slaughter them, Haku will freeze them, Kimimaro will slice them up, Gaara will turn them into orange juice, Sai will draw up something large, toothy, and probably very vicious, and I'll an army of me, all ready to explode at a moment's notice as backup, or I'll use Rasengan. “
dorothy.nediak chapter 5 . 12/10/2022
SQUEE this is so sadly adorable
dorothy.nediak chapter 1 . 12/10/2022
The beginning of an epic tale...
Pns1412 chapter 27 . 10/19/2022
8th gate Gai was madara
DragonGeek143 chapter 2 . 6/5/2022
I like Iruka/Anko
Guest chapter 33 . 5/13/2022
I understand that its been years but this book rlly is amazing, and it would rlly be nice to see more chapters for this story
AzureDragon363 chapter 13 . 3/15/2022
Last guy is possibly Iruka considering the whole "pay for using him as an excuse to go to war" "him" being Naruto. Most likely Asuma for using Hiruzen as an excuse
Alisha chapter 6 . 3/6/2022
I love Sasuke's dialogue. He's such a little shit lol
Alisha chapter 5 . 3/4/2022
I completely love Tsunade for taking care of these 9. And I'm in love with the 9's relationships. I've never read a story like this but always wanted to. This is a great story
Alisha chapter 1 . 3/4/2022
What a good first chapter. I feel so bad for these poor children
Areyem Meyera chapter 1 . 2/16/2022
Bruh, you made me cry in the very frist chapter. If this is how its going to be the whole time, I don’t think I can take it.

That’s a compliment though, and I’ll keep on reading hoping to get the same level of emotion. Be it sadness or excitement.
A Trash Mob chapter 5 . 2/7/2022
Omg momnade moment im bawling. I never want them to leave her.
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