Reviews for Hakumei |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A nice story and an interesting way to rewrite the story. Thank you for your hard work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man you got me crying |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you realize the only reason i'm giving this story a shot is cuz i sense Danzo Bashing, cuz fuck him |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this quote: "Sakura, if you don't punch them into next Wednesday, Sasuke will reduce them into charred remains, Hinata and Neji will slaughter them, Haku will freeze them, Kimimaro will slice them up, Gaara will turn them into orange juice, Sai will draw up something large, toothy, and probably very vicious, and I'll an army of me, all ready to explode at a moment's notice as backup, or I'll use Rasengan. “ |
![]() ![]() ![]() SQUEE this is so sadly adorable |
![]() ![]() ![]() The beginning of an epic tale... |
![]() ![]() ![]() 8th gate Gai was madara |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Iruka/Anko |
![]() ![]() I understand that its been years but this book rlly is amazing, and it would rlly be nice to see more chapters for this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Last guy is possibly Iruka considering the whole "pay for using him as an excuse to go to war" "him" being Naruto. Most likely Asuma for using Hiruzen as an excuse |
![]() ![]() I love Sasuke's dialogue. He's such a little shit lol |
![]() ![]() I completely love Tsunade for taking care of these 9. And I'm in love with the 9's relationships. I've never read a story like this but always wanted to. This is a great story |
![]() ![]() What a good first chapter. I feel so bad for these poor children |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bruh, you made me cry in the very frist chapter. If this is how its going to be the whole time, I don’t think I can take it. That’s a compliment though, and I’ll keep on reading hoping to get the same level of emotion. Be it sadness or excitement. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg momnade moment im bawling. I never want them to leave her. |