Reviews for Hakumei
Guest chapter 33 . 5/13/2022
I understand that its been years but this book rlly is amazing, and it would rlly be nice to see more chapters for this story
AzureDragon363 chapter 13 . 3/15/2022
Last guy is possibly Iruka considering the whole "pay for using him as an excuse to go to war" "him" being Naruto. Most likely Asuma for using Hiruzen as an excuse
Alisha chapter 6 . 3/6/2022
I love Sasuke's dialogue. He's such a little shit lol
Alisha chapter 5 . 3/4/2022
I completely love Tsunade for taking care of these 9. And I'm in love with the 9's relationships. I've never read a story like this but always wanted to. This is a great story
Alisha chapter 1 . 3/4/2022
What a good first chapter. I feel so bad for these poor children
Areyem Meyera chapter 1 . 2/16/2022
Bruh, you made me cry in the very frist chapter. If this is how its going to be the whole time, I don’t think I can take it.

That’s a compliment though, and I’ll keep on reading hoping to get the same level of emotion. Be it sadness or excitement.
A Trash Mob chapter 5 . 2/7/2022
Omg momnade moment im bawling. I never want them to leave her.
Tiffgarant chapter 9 . 11/29/2021
Inbreeding if you read any Harry Potter you would know what I'm talking about.
GamerTag2228 chapter 27 . 10/25/2021
why do you need to kill gai off? the 7nth gate was enough to beat Kisame, an S rank ninja. Baki is not an S rank ninja (only A rank), and the 8th gate kills you when you use it, so why the fuck is gai using it now?
Lord Vaserious chapter 32 . 9/22/2021
Kisame is dead, and so are many others. Fascinating choices.
Lord Vaserious chapter 31 . 9/22/2021
Excellent chapter. I love the batlles!
Lord Vaserious chapter 29 . 9/22/2021
Excellent chapter! I adore this fanfiction.
Lord Vaserious chapter 28 . 9/21/2021
Excellent battles and even better the mystery with Orochimaru!
Lord Vaserious chapter 27 . 9/21/2021
Excellent chapter and battles! Horray for Itachi.
Lord Vaserious chapter 26 . 9/21/2021
I adore the shitshow that the Chunin exams always turn out to be!
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