|Reviews for He Leaves, She Watches|
| 0111 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
I'm sorry how old does your profile say you are? Fifteen or something? Well for someone that age you know how to write a good story! I'm only a couple of years older, and I find it quite difficult XD It really was beautifully written! Keep it up! I'm sure you could get far with stuff like this :)
| Charmingly-Evil chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
aw how sad poor mrs. lovett. this story was written beautifuly, well done
| Todd666 chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
I could see this happening in the movie. Very well written!
| ABloodyWonder chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
Actually sounds a lot more "in character" than the fics that tell about their came-out-from-nowhere love... Not like i dont like them... I actually love them!
I too am totally obsessed wityh Johnny Depp...
| Red Queen Megz chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Wickedly in every way.
| spedclass chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
| Sepsis chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
its very realistic...he doesnt love her at all..but she does...
sad, but very real
| TheDeathChamber chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Aw, so sad! Great writing!
| nicoleb chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
AW! That was so sad and sweet! I know Sweeny has... problems, but still! He and Mrs. Lovett are so adorable together!
| x Lost Hero x chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
it was good. i liked it.
| ff345 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
o this was fabulous and beautifully written, i hope you write more in the future!
| Shedemei chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Your writing style definitely complements the content of this piece. Poor Nellie, and Sweeney too, really. Well done!
| Lobsters forever chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Yes you pulled it off, beautifully too. That was really sad. Poor Nellie.
| xlawa chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I feel so bad for Nellie.
| Linnet Bird chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
Just awesome...very in character...would love to read more!