|Reviews for Slipped Away|
| MajinHunter chapter 2 . 7/27/2012
I could barley read thentest of the chapter I was crying so much. (you should really continue this!)
| Musette Fujiwara chapter 2 . 3/15/2008
Bulma really was vegeta's life...
I loved it...
| Ashamed Kawaii chapter 2 . 3/12/2008
So sorry but I have one criticizes for you one of this points is that NEVER! Vegeta actuarial thus for the death of Bulma, at first not never asked him favors and Yamcha least, it's okay if that change to make a good person but not to that degree ... I hope not bother you but while you change your personality to the characters and I think that's not fair ... I hope you change those details, and I'll repeat don't angry I just want that you are better writter
| Vampweresaiyan chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I only have one word to inquire... tear(sob...sniff) gret start by the way, it has...(thinking)... a lot of emotions :)
| skippay chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
that was a really good start you should continue
| Little-Madman-of-my-house chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
| FallenGrace101 chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
oaky for your sake the begining is good but how did she die that's my question