|Reviews for Help|
| Pyro'sBest chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
This story is so amazing, it's really. really good!
| InkHeart17 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Oh god. See how much I love your writing to brave one of the few things in literature that makes me cringe and have to grip my wrists as I read? Cutting makes me shudder and wince any time I think of it. I'd stab myself in the neck over slitting my wrists if I wanted to commit suicide, I'm that squeamish. BUT strangely enough, this story didn't repulse me at all. Maybe because it WAS out of character for Bella, but I liked it just the same. Manic, razor Bella is... um, interesting, I guess is the only word I can think of. I liked Edward's reaction to her scars the best though.
| CapacityForWings chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Haunting. His reaction to seeing her arm.. it was spot on. No one could have written it better. I'm convinced of that.
| BulletproofLover chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
| icemonster56 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
This is pure amazing-ness. So emotional and raw. I seriously felt like I was feeling what Bella was feeling.
| MyMomThinksImAwesome chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I'm lost for words. SERIOUSLY. This made me cry a little bit. I always wondered what would it be like if Bella'd have resorted to cutting. Wonderful job :D
| HarryPotter4evah chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
I really liked this one-shot, even though you are right, it is an OC thing for Bella to do.
Anyway. She was going through so much pain after Edward left her, and this showed a way she could have handled it. I loved how Edward found out and she thought : "My help had come".
| mmm donut seeds chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Bittersweet, but all the better for it.
| I'm Randomspicuous chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I really want a sequal or even more chapters but what would u put in them? I always loved cutting or suicide fics :D
| Eclipse My Reality chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
wouldnt the whole bloody "help" image be an awsome memory for bella to accidently show Edward after shes changed and got her power? heh heh heh.
| twilight-is-lovee chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Ah, I was looking for something angsty, yet ExB! Thanks for providing me with that! :D
| MidnightThoughts chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
this was really good. i've seen a few of 'bella cuts herself' story's but yours really seemed to stick out to me. Awesome job! :D
| Aeromance chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Oh my Edward. That was beautiful, and painful, and sad, and disheartening, yet so strong and loving. Its a very deep story with so many emotions, and you wrote it all so beautifully! I've always been sensitive to stories, feeling what the characters I was reading about felt. Well, I was rubbing my wrists and crying through the whole story. I am not a past cutter, or a current cutter, nor do I ever think I will be, but I can certainly sympathize with Bella in this scenario.
Great one-shot, and keep it coming!
Much fanfic love,
| Topaz Ki chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
| Porcelain Mortal chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
Simply... heartbreaking. And breathtaking. This story is so realistic, even though it's OC for Bella. To me, Bella's pain was so intense that it would make sense for her to resort to cutting herself. I loved the part about getting the blood out of her veins, because that was the reason that he left - because she was human.
Edward's reaction to Bella's scars is spot-on and heartbreaking. I can imagine the immense pain it would cause him to see that Bella had hurt herself in his absence, especially that she had purposely spilled her own blood. This story was absolutely heartbreaking, but beautiful the way the emotions came to life. Very well-written.