Reviews for You're Holding My Heart
livelaughlove79 chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
another chapter please
blehhh chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Hey I want to read more ! please dont end the story on this note !
The Witch of Endor chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I don't claim to like Orton at all, but I find the fact you call his real-life wife a 'gutter slut' in your Author's Note and suggest that he only married her because she is pregnant with his child deeply offensive.

Actually, I was so appalled by it; I didn't get past your notes.

I know this is fan fiction, but the wrestlers and their families are real people, and I think you should take that into consideration when you write.
babyxbxgurl chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
AWW! Poor Jaice and Randy! Damn it Sam why did u have to get pregnant and damn it Randy why couldn't you use protection! I love this story you should continue it but sadly it's just a one shot, but i still love it! )
Sandra Moore7474 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Great chapter
Ctinaisfashion chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
this is so good to just be a one shot
101mizzpoet101 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008

if you don't continue this, it'll break my heart... that slutty whore spam... fckin hate her... well you already know this very well... i just want you to continue this so badly!

The two of them belong together and spam she just ruins everything both fictional and in reality... gr! UPDATE!
Sammeh chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Aw.. This was so sad.. I really liked it.. :]