|Reviews for Critical Care|
| teenlee chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
that was seriously amazing.
jeez! please update soon! ah.
| minipoison chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
stupid edward, always protective.
| Lady Skye 1992 chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
Awesome chapter! Love the cliffdiving part! Please update soon!
| OliviaJane chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
lol, Bella saves Jacob.
I wanted to let you know that at least half of your sentences
are missing periods at the end. Maybe there was a problem when
| daz3dandconfus3d chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
You need a each sentence. I didn't see a whole lot of punctuation. But it's good, I guess.
| barbiedoll123 chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
i wonder if she is going to tell him
| PaleViolet chapter 14 . 8/9/2008
I love your story, Bella being sick makes me sad tho :( Please Update soon!
| GoogleMouth260 chapter 14 . 8/8/2008
cancer? oh my god! that's so sad. this story has made me tear up, badly! it's so good. i can't wait for more!
| BellaPattinson chapter 14 . 8/1/2008
hmm, how can she go from one guy from another? oh well, we finally know she loves Edward. Can't wait for next chapter.
| XxAnGeLGonEBaDxX chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
Great story this chapter was funny, Bella actully liking the rain, heheh jakes mad cant wait to see more
| amobutterfly25 chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
jake has the green monster. its so becoming of his character. its shouldn't matter to him really i mean she only has one life to live and its sort of shorter so why isn't he letting her live the way she wants?
| teenlee chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
aww that was amazing :)
| Lady Skye 1992 chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
WOnderful chapter. Please update as soon as possible
| barbiedoll123 chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
aw edward and bella are so cute
| BloomingNights chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
i love feel good chapters, i wonder what the vision alice had was about...can't wait for more!