Reviews for Critical Care
teenlee chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
oh. wow.

that was seriously amazing.

jeez! please update soon! ah.
minipoison chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
stupid edward, always protective.

jordan
Lady Skye 1992 chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
Awesome chapter! Love the cliffdiving part! Please update soon!

-AMS
OliviaJane chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
lol, Bella saves Jacob.

I wanted to let you know that at least half of your sentences

are missing periods at the end. Maybe there was a problem when

you uploaded.
daz3dandconfus3d chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
You need a each sentence. I didn't see a whole lot of punctuation. But it's good, I guess.
barbiedoll123 chapter 15 . 8/19/2008
i wonder if she is going to tell him
PaleViolet chapter 14 . 8/9/2008
I love your story, Bella being sick makes me sad tho :( Please Update soon!
GoogleMouth260 chapter 14 . 8/8/2008
cancer? oh my god! that's so sad. this story has made me tear up, badly! it's so good. i can't wait for more!
BellaPattinson chapter 14 . 8/1/2008
hmm, how can she go from one guy from another? oh well, we finally know she loves Edward. Can't wait for next chapter.
XxAnGeLGonEBaDxX chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
Great story this chapter was funny, Bella actully liking the rain, heheh jakes mad cant wait to see more

-Angel
amobutterfly25 chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
jake has the green monster. its so becoming of his character. its shouldn't matter to him really i mean she only has one life to live and its sort of shorter so why isn't he letting her live the way she wants?
teenlee chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
aww that was amazing :)
Lady Skye 1992 chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
WOnderful chapter. Please update as soon as possible

-AMS
barbiedoll123 chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
aw edward and bella are so cute
BloomingNights chapter 14 . 7/27/2008
i love feel good chapters, i wonder what the vision alice had was about...can't wait for more!
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