Reviews for Critical Care
bubbles-are-blue chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
coolaly! is there more?
Autumn Cullen chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Oh! New story! Yay something for me to read :] Its off to a great start, very very intriguing. Have fun with this one.
Alicefand chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
oh squeal..another good story coming from you. can't wait!
bloodredeclipse chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I love this story! One question, is it going to have the original pairings or not? In the summary, it makes it seem like she meets and falls in love with a different Cullen first. Love it and I hope you update soon!
crimson hearts chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
i loved it! i only hope you put up chapters fast because it sounds like it is going to be a very good story:D and i just want to read it all already!:D but i have a question, is bella anorexic or something like that? i just have a feeling she is because of some things that you wrote. anyways plz add another chapter soon! pretty plz!
BloomingNights chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
i like it so far, its different, but i like it. can't wait for an update!
Fightingrose chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
7/10, fairly good, keep going.
BellaPattinson chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
it's great. please update ASAP!

the start was awesome, but i got kind of lost when Jacob leaves and she goes to the hospital?

CrayonsCanMeltOnUsForAllICare chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
i really like your story update soon please
Villians aren't always evil chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
love it
Lady Skye 1992 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
i liked it. continue soon. i wanna see where this goes.
serenaarchibald chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I liked it, even if jacob is in it
lisadianemill chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I loved it, can't wait to read more.
lumierelove chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I always thought Bella was the voluntary type. Good job.
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