|Reviews for From when we were young|
| a-098jhkjh chapter 7 . 6/28/2009
| Cullenfreak212 chapter 7 . 6/8/2009
i loved it hope you write more
| Alskgirl chapter 7 . 5/26/2009
AH THIS IS SO OMG ! I LOVE THIS STORY!
| scrapmypieces chapter 7 . 5/16/2009
AAw finally the gang is all together and no more chapters?
| scrapmypieces chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Bella and Edward are so cute!
| leee pontruce chapter 4 . 5/7/2009
Judging by your grammar you seem to be 9. Seriously, who taught you English?
| leee pontruce chapter 3 . 5/7/2009
I and Mike will protect you
Please, tell me you see what's wrong in this statement. If not, you shouldn't be on fanfiction.
| leee pontruce chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
incorrect: born", I cried
correct: born," I cried
incorrect: Push.", I squeezed
correct: Push." I squeezed
incorrect: "Congratulations you two. Its a girl like we expected and she looks healthy, would you like to hold her Mrs Swan", a nurse asked me.
correct: "Congratulations you two! Its a girl, like we expected, and she looks healthy. Would you like to hold her, Mrs. Swan?" a nurse asked me.
Great plot. But you got some comma/punctuation issues
| booklover15 chapter 7 . 4/5/2009
omg u have 2 continue this is gr8!
plz plz plz update soon
this story is fab
| VampLoreLover chapter 7 . 3/7/2009
I know you have not updated in a while but I hope you will, I really want to find out what happens next. It was such a sweet story, please do more chapters. 8 stars. :D.
| kwfreeman chapter 7 . 1/15/2009
SUPER CUTE! Continue soon!
| Sakura Mishimoto chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
oh my gosh! they're so cute!
| GeorgListingsfuturewife chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
I love this story. At first it shows true friendship that transforms into something as if they were siblings then true love.
| Twilighter24 chapter 7 . 8/17/2008
it's really good' please update?
| 1girliegurl chapter 3 . 8/15/2008
I LOVE IT I AM RE READING IT!