|Reviews for Almost|
| DrummerDancer chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Sweet! Not your usual style, but good regardless. I enjoyed it.
| animefreak3721 chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
OMG THUS WAS AN AMAZING STORY I LOVED IT! MY FAVORITE FMA FANFIC YET! Loved how ackward Ed was and when al came singin that song was pure genius. But makes u wonder was he in his armor not... I'm imaging him normal not in his armor. BEST STORY EVER Lovvvvvvved it !
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
i love it
| whydoyoucarewhatmynameis chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
that was a good fan fiction. i liked it especially when al started making fun of ed. i have done that to my older sister before and its alway's really funny to see the reaction you get from it!
| Rainbowed-Sunned-Spirit chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Aww, so sweet! Ed is so adorable :) Al, I really love you but stop it with your teasing! LOL. Great job!
| ninaxw chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Cute little EdWin story. I like it!
| els1324 chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Well for your first EdxWinry fic I think you did a fantastic job! I also feel you kept them in character and totally did the pairing justice!
And yes, you made me smile a lot. :)
Great job, I loved it! 3
| xXDiamonderoseXx chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Hey there ! This was amazingly sweet! I loved it a lot great job !
| nightmist379 chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
that was so good! not like all those other stories where everything seems perfect when they kiss lol. good job on the awkwardness! it makes it sound more real, oh and good ending btw
| saekuto chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
love this one shot! ed's exuses where great! :)
| Bellus Animi chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I really like this.
The progression is great, and I like how you have Winry being so nervous about what he's going to think, etc.
I don't know, I just like this.
| sheepeater chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
A very sweet and believable story. Poor Al's in for it now, though. xD Keep up the excellent work.
| Clouds For Climbing chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
I thought this was brilliant.
The thoughts and actions were completely plausible, and an embarassed and babbling Ed is very cute. It's so strange to see him off-balance, but I think it totally works in the situation.
I love how Winry's thoughts make it clear that she likes him as more than a friend, but doesn't make her out to be a player when wondering if her likes her back.
Definately made me smile. )
| Bookwrm389 chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Normally, I'm not a fangirl, but this story made me squeal like one! It was so cute, so in character and so plausible!
And the ending was perfect! I'd like to think Al would have a little more tact and leave them alone...but then again, he probably couldn't resist teasing his big brother!
| Midnight Hikari chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
Aww this was so sweet! Everyone was in character, as far as the romance goes in the series anyway. _U