Reviews for Gum
GallyandBlack chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Aw poor Jirou :) Really cute!
Wisteria-Child chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Ahahaha. That was hilarious. Lol. Marui, you should be mindful and careful next time! XD
ritsu01 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
OMG! Jiroh bald!(imagining that Jiroh is bald cheering on Marui's games) HaHaHaHa! That was so funny! Good one!
Jewelieishness chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
This is so very cute _

Sweet Pair~ Oh, and the last line just killed me dead. xDD

With Love,

Carla chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Please write more Ato/Ryo.
Dudly chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
He’d just have to accept that a life of no hair would be his destiny.

HAHHAA XDD Why, what a wonderful destiny! xDD

I liked it. It made me laugh. xP

-ruffles crassreine's hair-

Dudly -xx-
The Night Owl is Addicted chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I don't know how you pulled this off, Reine, but this was totally genius!

Ahaha! I would have never thought of this, given the word: hairdresser. XD

Lovely! ROFL!

For that you get a... Oh wait, I can't give you a pounce... a very, very light pat in the back then! XD
Hiroro chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
hahahaha! nice one!

gummy gummy fic! chewylicious! XD
allek-k chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
haha, great! It was really cute and "sweet"! love it
disfigured-dream chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
omg, so cute! But I don't want Jiroh to be bald. -sulks-

Quite nice, and a... plot that I seem to have seen before, but don't worry, its not cliched. )
isalsalism chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Lol! :D Loved it!

reckless-rage chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Kyahahahahaha! *squeal* I think you did a pretty good job of this! Yay!

Typo time (squirms): took out a new peace of gum from his pocket - peace - piece. That was all I could see, though, so that was good. I got heaps of typos when I put MINE up, haha. '

They can get pointers from Jackal...ROFL. Lollies are SO not Bunta! Teehee!

Great try, Reine! I'm really enjoying this!
NDebN chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
You know I was just thinking when you would post something again XD Anyway good story, it was really cute...maybe you should write more oneshots Anyway I look forward to anything else you write XD