Ughh. I came here to check out the "conspiracy" I was promised but I can't make it to that part. Some of these ideas might've been "original" back in late 00s, but over the years they plain suck, so it's just another bashing fic with Headbastard, unexpected inheritances and so on. Does not worth it, dropped.

How can I write this tactfully so as not to offend you... I don't know if you made a fanfic for children or not, but damn, it's really childish. The cliche is pouring out of every crack. Like two children and a bunch of adults without any real power (money, influence, political/civic reputation). Like, come on! I don't know if I've read your work anywhere before, but... it's rubbish. Now my opinion as an ordinary person who simply understands what a hobby is. Dude, may your life be sweet. I know that not all people understand what it means to write (I swear to God, writing a term paper so that it doesn't look like it was stupidly copied is a real pain in the ass.) Just be patient.

this is a very good story and i am sad that there is not more

You wrote: "That will be no problem. Can I also pay the Bank to remove everything from this vault which is not Galleons, Knut's, or Sickles from this vault and move it to the said new vault."

Why the hell would you think the plural of ‘Knut’ needed an apostrophe?! You made the pluralizations of galleon and sickle properly. Further grammatical editing is required. Also, redundancy. Get a beta. You need some assistance with proper grammar.

Damn, the second Tom shows up, I realize how this is going, and sorry, am dropping it. Not even gonna bother continuing. Ya can't redeem a psychotic insane mass murderer.

Sucks you abandoned this story

Brilliant

I really like this story.

This is a GREAT STORY!

is this gonna be updated? (probably not, it's been 13.5 years)

isnt the way to fix horcruxes just to feel remorse for your actions in creating it?

Damn it...I just re-read this story and it still isn't finished! If I had checked it better I wouldn't have done that!
Getting that out of the way...it's been over eight years since you posted anything. I don't suppose there is a chance you might continue and/or finish this story?
Please? It's too good to leave. So are you other stories.

Thank you for writing the story.
There are still at least two open issues about the pureblood conspiracy:
1) there are to many pureblood families killed off like the Blacks and the Longbottoms. A to limited genetic pool is a very deadly thing to a population.
2) a long term viable caste society still needs a viable way for people to get one step up the ladder. If not for themselves, than for their children or grandchildren.
This can also help with 1), but only up to a point.
Alternatively there needs to be a honorable (or acceptable) way to leave the society.

Regards

HEDWIG is BRILLIANT!

You and your Cliffies!

By the way…..

Your writing is excellent.
So, you go not need a “teaser”
to keep my attention on this
story.

To steal a Pop Culture Anecdote:

Once is amusing,
Twice is curious if not a bit annoying,,
The Third Time … demands Editorial Action.

Cheers!