8 think the overall idea of this story was good.
there is food writing here.
but the sex scenes were awfullike non con disguised as hoping to not be. like bad bdsm without even saying bdsm.
this fic needs trigger warnings #noncon #dubcon

oh, thank goodness at least that part was a trick. actually cleverly done

the story was great until this part, which really disappointed me.
1. zabini is a toxic psycho who kidnaps and ties up a woman... and she protests but actually loves it? that's some sick rape fantasy right there.
2. is Hermione returning a fever dream? if not, it makes no sense whatsoever.

I love it

If you haven't tried it yet you should ask your doctor about ubrelvy and qlipta. New migraine meds with almost no side effects. They're expensive though. Nice story too. Draco is very intense. Love it.

Amazing

5 stars,beautiful story. Thanks for persevering and finishing it. People are still finding joh in it over a decade later!

Okay. Def points for Malfoy after running away. And excited that they’re going to try dating for real now.

Oh myy. While I appreciate this Dolohov warning Hermione, it seems he also has other intentions. And then there is Draco with his secrets. Smelling the drama already.

Loving the story so far, but there are so many grammatical errors that it’s really hard to concentrate.

Ron is such a twat. I still can’t believe JKR had her marry him - ugh!

You seem to have the perfect closing sentences for your chapters!

Oh so like this broody and intimidating Draco!

Cracking storyline, hilarity and drama throughout. Thank you.

Blaise - ‘guarding his hair all night’. Hysterical...