|Reviews for Finding Heaven|
| godsdaughter77 chapter 12 . 6/28/2008
I enjoyed this story and loved how you showed the friendship between the team members, especially Teyla and Sheppard. It was a great story and well written. Thanks for sharing it.
| Astraldust chapter 12 . 4/21/2008
Interesting idea, I'm glad they got Shep back. I enjoyed this story and thanks for writing it.
| Duchess67 chapter 12 . 4/14/2008
Got a little choked up myself, there at the end. :)
Well, I liked this story a lot and I'm very glad you shared it with us. *vbg*
What will you write next? *curious*
| Space1Traveler chapter 12 . 4/13/2008
For a first time, this was very good. It was better than I could ever do. I liked your plot and the voice of the characters was very good.
I didn't care for the transition between scenes. It seemed abrupt and disjointed. Some things were left unresolved, like Chaya coming back or the fate of the generator.
Good job. I can't wait to read your other stuff. Thanks for sharing your talent with me.
| Obsessedfringey chapter 12 . 4/13/2008
Great! It was brilliant, endearing, creative, brilliant, amazing, unexplored and briliant! You need to write more of this kind of stuff!
read both of the one-shots you mentioned and they were both great too! Cac't wait for your next story!
Did i mention it was brilliant?
Thankyou for keeping me entertained and on-edge all this time!
I loved Ronon's strange feelings towards it at first, Rodney being unsur, Carson being upset. But most of all, i think i loved the John-Teyla friendship, it was touching with amazing undertones.
You did amazingly on the characters and the story as a whole!
I absolutely cannot wait for your next story!
| Deleted67545 chapter 12 . 4/13/2008
*laughs* Ronon put rocks in McKay's pack? Oh, that's good!
| Whirlwind421 chapter 11 . 4/12/2008
Good story! Yay! John didn't die!
| Deleted67545 chapter 11 . 3/31/2008
How I'd kill to have friends like Rodney, Teyla, Ronon, and Carson!
| Duchess67 chapter 11 . 3/31/2008
Aw, I really like this. AND Ronon's last line too. *snicker*
| jasminesmommy chapter 11 . 3/31/2008
that meeting was great lol:)
| Sachita chapter 10 . 3/24/2008
Aw. I loved this chapter and great, that John is alive again.
But he probably wouldn't tell anyone where or how he got these scars, not even Elizabeth...
| Janna Silver Hawkins chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
wow...this was a awesome story! Great work :)
| Duchess67 chapter 10 . 3/22/2008
Flea coming? LOL Too freakin' funny and I love it that John was strong enough to try and slap the man for saying that. *vbg*
| jasminesmommy chapter 10 . 3/21/2008
lol poor sheppard finally home and he has a yellow bug on him lol :)
| Deleted67545 chapter 10 . 3/21/2008
I love the fact that Sheppard was in pain, and yet he still managed to try to hit Carson. He cracks me up sometimes!