|Reviews for Devoid of Thought, Melting Alone Together|
| Bob-The-Magic-Fish chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
Not big things to point out: in the sentence 'She knew he lover her.' It should be loveD not loveR.
And you missed a capital at the start of the sentence 'he said so every day...'
| KellyRoxton chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
It was a great story I hope you write more. You have the longing down pat...
Please write more.