Reviews for Harry’s Twist
torlan2003 chapter 2 . 11/14
Great story, I don't know what will happen next. It is an original idea.
anthea tronchard step chapter 2 . 8/24
it is pretty good. Why did you stop?
PixelizedGenocide chapter 2 . 8/21
. . . Bloody fucking hell, this was awesome
tabala chapter 2 . 7/30
Very interesting, I do wish it would continue though
tanithlipsky chapter 2 . 7/27
very good
FotoDi chapter 1 . 7/26
Your understanding of the strategies and layers of manipulation employed by Dumbledore are impressive. How you depict McGonagall's complicity in Chapter 2 shocked me but also raised many questions. Was passionate Minerva truly the overworked, battle-weary, sycophantic dupe that JKR painted? Your portrayal really highlights her complicity. Additionally, while you do not involve Flitwick, he is another key player that I find suspect. Of dual heritage, brilliant, a proven competitor (Dueling Circuit), my supposition is that Flitwick was the long term mole acting as a spy Goblin Nation. He was a mostly Passive player in the Wizarding world due to his true allegiance to the Goblins. A thought for exploration later...
In point of fact, I would argue that Dumbledore did manipulate his "controls" - albeit in JKR canon he was more subtle than employing outright monetary bribery. He preyed on their weaknesses and ambitions. I believe the process is called "grooming" and it terrifies me.
BurnedMiw chapter 2 . 6/3
good for a laugh, truly
manaal18 chapter 2 . 5/16
Hey.. I just stumbled across this story and I find it very interesting..
Are you planning on continuing it or are you posting on another website ?
Shizuka Saruda-Uchiha chapter 1 . 5/2
This is really good fanfiction, I hope you will update next chapter...
Thank you :)
Treecat1812 chapter 2 . 4/1
As an avid reader on this site I have to say, this was the best start to a new story that I've read in a long time. Sad not to finish it. Have to say as well that you have style when it comes to developing plots. Have "followed" you on this site, hope to hear more from you in the future.
Bronze chapter 2 . 1/2
Shame this died nine years ago, it was good. I liked the part where Bumblemore throw a temper tantrum because Harry stood up for himself and outed his spies along with all his thefts in the Prophet.
BooksAreMedicine chapter 2 . 12/31/2016
Yay for adding in Luna

The dream meeting was pretty cool
BooksAreMedicine chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
Good for Harry and nice points about it being a war

I always love fanfictions where Neville and Harry are better friends
Colin Palmer chapter 2 . 12/15/2016
A great story, I hope you will finnish it one day.
Scarlet Lupin chapter 2 . 12/14/2016
Love this sooooo much please up date soon I can't wait to see Harry settle down
-SL xxx
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