|Reviews for Feral|
| Neshomeleh chapter 9 . 9/30/2012
Great! That was a hell of a story...Thanks!
| The Lilac Elf of Lothlorien chapter 9 . 4/4/2011
Very good story. Definitly gripping and suspenseful.
| HeartsDragon chapter 9 . 10/4/2010
hahahahahahahahahahaha i love the cats name! i kept laughing the entire time i was reading the story Fluffers! my family must think i'm insane P
Haha, this story is fantastic! ] i really loved the ending.
| LittleLurker chapter 9 . 8/24/2010
I really liked this story. The plot was fantastic and I thoroughly enjoyed all the little things like the spirit of the crying woman, the cat's name (especially its 'real' long name, great choice) and also the repetition in history (last remaining member of their family and such). Your style is also very good, although I have a teeny, tiny critique for this one... (sorry, hope you don't take this the wrong way since I really like reading your stories and I have read most of them even though I haven't reviewed everyone).
Anyhow, what I didn't like so much, were the many repetitions of "Oh god, (dean)" and "please, please, please, (Dean)" in Sam's thoughts (sometimes words directed to Dean)... I guess I understand what you wanted to achieve with this, i.e. something like Sam's brain is kind of shutting down and he keeps thinking the same over and over again, but it did get a little boring there (not much though, mind you). However, I thought it might have helped if you had described (in detail) what Sam was seeing when he started in on one of those thought-loops again, e.g. like how fragile Dean looked, or what he thought of the gun-shot wound, or whatever else. Especially the gun-shot wound(s) had a lot of potential to make Sam feel even worse since he caused them...
Okay, I guess I've nagged enough now - sorry again, but I really want to make sure you know I liked the story a lot. It was full of suspense and besides there are hardly errors in any of the nine long chapters. So, in short: I hope you keep writing AND sharing.
Best wishes to you and take care! D.
| 7kstar chapter 9 . 5/9/2010
Ah...tis happy. I wish the show would have put more little things like John checking up on them, even if they never saw him.
I believe the guy cared, that he did keep an eye on them even if it was through reports from others.
I don't believe Dean would be so concerned about his dad if he had only been a terrible dad, he had to memories and reactions that conflicted with the hurt his dad gave them.
Loved that fluffy was the cat that took him out, no he won't live that down now will he.
| Rosetta Brunestud chapter 9 . 11/5/2009
I loved it *-*
That was really cool, I don't know what else more I can say... I loved the moment when Sam shot Dean, that looks so detailed... I really do loved it
Kisses and thx for sharing ehehe
| Kimber1961 chapter 9 . 8/28/2009
This story was fantastic! I discovered the wonderful world of Supernatural fanfic just a little while ago, and I've been going back and reading some older stuff. I am SO glad I got to read this! I loved the times when Dean went crazy, yet tried to convince himself it was just the fever. And poor Sam continually telling him not to let a cat named Fluffers be the one to take him out. This was just wonderful!
| KaoruKamiya307 chapter 9 . 7/4/2009
Wow! I absoultely love this story! Fluffer Nufter Tuffkins *snorts giggles* So much fun! I really enjoyed those momments when Dean went crazy and Sam had to reach out to him! Fantastic job! You're a wonderful author and I can't wait to read more from you! The other one I have read is "In Darkness Let me Dwell" which I absolutely love too! :D Happy 4th of July!
| Dianne chapter 9 . 12/2/2008
Wow, you have such an amazing imagination! I loved the story, the whole way through. Very entertaining and suspenseful with just enough humour injected when the boys teased each other about Fluffers to take some of the edge off so we could see the characters motives clearly. This was well thought out and planned and I liked the length of the story. It was long enough to entertain fully without any dullness and I know how hard that can be to write. The doctor, Stan was a great character of your creation and you should be proud to have made such a strong original character. The back story was engaging and made sense with the family ties and the history of the lockets and the village. And you managed to give us a happy ending which was fantastic. Thanks for sharing.
| bhoney chapter 9 . 11/5/2008
Loved the flashback to feverish Dean, trying to get Sam to cut down the trees. And LOVED Fluffers' real name. Poor Dean, such an indignity! ROTFL Well done, Muffy! I liked this one a lot!
| bhoney chapter 8 . 11/5/2008
| bhoney chapter 7 . 11/5/2008
The wax pentacle idea is BRILLIANT! I may have to borrow that sometime for a fic. ;)
Glad the good Dr. seems to be on their side, and able to help them.
| bhoney chapter 3 . 11/5/2008
Loved the flashback, and that Sam's the only one that can get through to feverish Dean. But, uh...remind me not to give you a gun when you're feverish/delusional. LOL
| bhoney chapter 2 . 11/5/2008
Loved the stuffed dog, and the glimpse into another time Sam brought him one in the hospital.
| bhoney chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Loved that Dean knew it was Sam without even looking! Glad Sam found him in the hospital.