Reviews for There was No Time like Then
irockyourworld123 chapter 8 . 12/7/2011
Are you going to write more please tell me that it doesn't just end like that?...please write more and if it's done then could you come back to it cause your gonna make me cry my eyes out!DX I loved it though if that counts for anything? I really did just not the ending! Lol xD but seriously change the ending...

Please and thankyou
Shadowmaiden3 chapter 8 . 12/20/2010

The suspense is killing me and you write so well.
Shadowmaiden3 chapter 7 . 12/20/2010

*bashes head against desk*

I am soo sorry.

Ahem... I love this because of it's intensity, the way you are a bare-bones kind of writer that distills a scene to it's essence and MAKES us feel every second. My only gripe is that you haven't updated in two years.
naturally morbid chapter 8 . 1/11/2009
Gah! This was totally sad!

I was so ready to cry!

You need to update!
naturally morbid chapter 7 . 12/15/2008
Aw, there was a happy moment _

Can't wait for you to continue soon _
Sapphire Rose E chapter 6 . 4/9/2008
update soon! i cant wait till the parts with esther! hehe
naturally morbid chapter 6 . 4/9/2008
Aw poor Abel!


Bad cain! Bad!
Sapphire Rose E chapter 5 . 4/6/2008
update soon okay? the chapters are so short so you need to update more cuz its really good thanks
naturally morbid chapter 5 . 4/5/2008
Oh my god!

Another cliffhanger?


Sapphire Rose E chapter 4 . 3/22/2008
wow! so good! update soon! thanks bye
naturally morbid chapter 4 . 3/22/2008
Loving the judgement _

Very creative and with the flashbacks too

So what is in store?
Sapphire Rose E chapter 3 . 3/19/2008
update soon! i want to know what happens next
naturally morbid chapter 3 . 3/19/2008
Still too short lol

Always leaves me wanting more _

I like the representation of the flame too

Excellent job!
naturally morbid chapter 2 . 3/15/2008
Still interesting _

One correction though, it should be Lilith instead of Lithe right?
Nenshite chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Very, very sad but it lacked depth. What you need is good detailing and deeper emotion.

Loved it though.
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