Reviews for One Day Too Many
101mizzpoet101 chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
UN FUCKING BELIEVABLE! YOU WROTE A SEX SCENE! like seriously this is softcore porn or something! he didn't even take off her panties lmfao hahahahaahahahahahahhahahaha omg im so proud of you lol finally you've done it..this will kick your scenes in my stories up a notch...coddles is a pussy lol...

love u
Pinayprincesa chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Aw so sweet!
Becky chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Okay, I just had to review again.

1. I hate Crispy

2. I've been telling him all along that he needs to ditch her...OH WAIT HE DID

3. Why the hell...are we sleeping in the same room...and NOT...you know

“Cody, I’ve know you for two months and one day now. I’ve hinted at you the whole time now, and you’re obviously retarded. I wanted to hit you for Crispy—I mean Melissa. Oh hell, I hate her. Cody, what were you thinking? So, this is it, Coddles. I want you. The ball’s in your court now.”

4. "I want you." Wow. How blunt can I be? And yes, he's retarded.

Cody took a giant step forward and attacked her mouth. Before she had time to process things and fully close her mouth from previously trying to speak, Cody started to French kiss her.

5. That last part makes me smile and die. And then I have to look at the program from last night and stare at his hottness and I can't stop smiling

Cody loved the innocent look in Becky’s eyes as he removed her clothes.

6. Innocent? INNOCENT? Let me tell you, the thoughts in my head were NOT innocent

He didn’t bother with Becky’s panties, but rather pushed them to the side as he entered her.

7. Okay, Dom

He made love to her against the wall for what felt like forever before carrying her to the bed and crawling on while she was still wrapped around him.

8. Dude, I would so fuck him against a wall. You have no idea...

9. Sappy shit at the end..

Okay, I find this horribly hilarious because I just read Dom's cftm review where she bitches about no sex scenes.

but this whole thing is a sex scene

and I love it
derivereine chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
OH EM GEE!

THIS WAS ADORABLE!
Failure Turtle chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I HATE CRISPY

major. Def. major

omg he hugged me

CHEETO

WE SLEEP IN THE SAME ROOM?

HE FUCKED HER?

I love this:

“Cody, I’ve know you for two months and one day now. I’ve hinted at you the whole time now, and you’re obviously retarded. I wanted to hit you for Crispy—I mean Melissa. Oh hell, I hate her. Cody, what were you thinking? So, this is it, Coddles. I want you. The ball’s in your court now.”

RETARDED

OMG SEX

WAIT A MINUTE LADY

WHAT ABOUT THE WHOLE "I WON'T DATE A FEMALE JEFF HARDY" STORY

I THOUGHT THIS WAS IT

I EXPECT ANOTHER ONE

OMG I LOVE CODY RUNNELS

AND YOU

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