Reviews for El Goonish Shive Delta
forkinyoureye chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Nice. I like the dialogue you came up with for Casey and the intro of the TFG sooner that in the main story. It's my fave inanimate object in the series. However, some of those moments didn't really feel like they worked with the story, like Casey suddenly popping up in armor and a trench coat. Otherwise, it's very EGS.
Nathanielb1 chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
I'm impressed by how well this turned out. Slightly annoyed, as I recently had an extremely similar idea, but impressed. The only major problem I noticed was that you failed to correct certain grammatical errors which troubled Shive. I would highly suggest extending this to cover later story arcs.
ArchAngelGundam chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Good, very good. I like your OC and you followed the comic to the letter. I'm imperesed, and looking forward to an update.
Dookie Overlord chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Not too bad, and it stuck to the story quite well, hopefully you'll update sometime.
Drashin chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
like it