Reviews for Nothin Like A Few Convulsions To Make A Man Commit
reachedfortheemergencybrake chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Oh, wow! You write Sheyla very well!

Great story!
APFW chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
NICE!
Asugar chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
The end is lovely. I love how you wrote John's internal thoughts.
bailey1ak chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
I really liked this story! Not much of a John Teyla fan before, but after reading a few of your stories I am becoming one.
CharmedAli chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
first fic, very well done for that :) i love it
TeylaFan chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Wow, this was amazing! Really excellent! :) Loved the ending too - obviously! :)
Foxyinthecity chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
I can relate. Great job! I was replaying the episdode in my mind while I was reading your fic. I love your insight as to what John was thinking while Thalen was in control of his body and in his mind.

So hopefully this won't be your last fic.

Hoping to see more from you.
sgafan360 chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Very good although i saw one or two errors hope to see more in the future :)
Sheppardster chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
I'm not much of a Sheyla fan, but I did enjoy reading this one.. it was very sweet and a good first SGA fic :) Thanks for writing it.
Ianthe-Echo chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Very good characterization...
sheppard1 chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Enjoyed the story. It was well written. I really appreciate good grammar, sentence structure, and continuity of thought. Makes it more pleasurable to read. Nice job.
AthosionWarrior chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
great story really loved it.

10/10

AW

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Sic Et Non chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
That was so cool! If only it could have happened in the episode! And not bad for your first trip into SGA fanfic.

I'll be keeping an eye on you!