Perceptive child. I also wonder what Eomer said in answer.

It was an exciting plot to see Lothiriel sent to Rohan and how she interacted with everyone in Edoras, the royal family and people, before and during the war. Her first meeting with Eomer was nice. I thought their falling in love was a bit rushed, since they had only met a couple of times, but I saw it was because it was needed to the plot regarding Grima and his schemes. Her stay in Hornburg was also fascinating, during the battle and her relationship with the twin sisters Leofe and Aeffe,as it has not started too good , seeing her as a opponent to their suitors' hunt. But it is so nice they formed an true friendship in the end (and both have found sweethearts). The rift between Eomer and Lothiriel and how it was fixed was written well and their effort to persuade Imrahil when he found out of their love. The wedding and the epilogue were a lovely ending for the story.

I cannot start to say how much I enjoyed this story. Your portrayal of Lothiriel is wonderful: she is both likable, relatable and deeply human. Eomer's depiction is also great, and even if I didn't particularly like him as a character before, you've made me see him in a new light.
Thank you very much for such an enjoyable read!

I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for it.

I really like this story, sometimes funny, sometimes serious... I am really glad I found it.

Ok, I am really enjoying the story, and I like this rendition of Lothiriel, but since I have noticed how well you follow the book I wanted to mention that Marshal Elfhelm died on the fields of Pelanor so he could not have sent Redwald.

Read this in Wattpad but wanted to leave a comment here as well. Loved this story so much!

Probably my fourth time reading this completely through. Thank you. It makes me smile and my heart is warmer than it was before.

My absolute favorite! I reread this story all the time! I just finished rereading your three original works. I bought them as soon as they were available. Your writing is very missed and I hope you have had time to work on new stories. Thank you for gifting us with such beautiful tales - both original and fan fiction.

Noooo Lothiriel! If only she told Eomer :(

Wonderful story. I’m sorry for not leaving a comment in each chapter, I just couldn’t stop reading. It was amazing. Perfect, actually. Thank you so much for making quarantine more bearable. I’m gonna go read Yours To Command now. xo

Aha! I read your little author’s note at the end. This whole chapter reminded me greatly of Beowulf and then you go and mention kennings. How absolutely delightful!

"I had just brought Rohan's army to a standstill."
What a fricken power move! Amazing writing!

such a perfect stunning story!

I am truly honored to have read your story. It was beautifully written, with incredible attention to detail and always had me smiling and feeling just as the characters would. I know that I don't know you personally, but I am so very proud of you for having written novels (that I'm currently searching for on Amazon) and that you have brought your writing to a new level in that regard.

I hope that you never stop writing and that you continue to share your amazing talents with writers such as myself :) 3