|Reviews for Living Legacy|
| DragonflyXxXDancer chapter 6 . 2/18/2011
This chapter was great, the argument at the beginning, the scene with Sev and his mother... and that ending! That ending was evil, lol, such a cliffhanger!
I love how Eileen still treats Sev as if he is a child.
I can't wait to read more.
| DragonflyXxXDancer chapter 5 . 2/18/2011
Another wonderful chapter.
The idea of Hermione's mark being like a "good" Dark Mark is interesting. I like how she can sense his magic through it.
I am enjoying your portrayal of Eileen very much in this story too )
The scene between Hermione and Sev was lovely. The emotions depicted were perfect.
| DragonflyXxXDancer chapter 4 . 2/18/2011
Aww, that chapter was rather adorable.
I like how you've portrayed Sev's mother. Her treatment of him as if he were still a little boy was a very cute touch. And of course, his behaviour as if he still felt as though he were a little boy was a nice touch too.
| DragonflyXxXDancer chapter 3 . 2/18/2011
Ahh...suspense...you are very good at writing it.
I loved this chapter. I like how Bill has become agitated and flys off the handle and Ron is a bit more calm and collected.
It's nice that Harry and Ron have accepted her announcement kindly.
And again, nice ending.
| Rameelia chapter 5 . 2/18/2011
Another lovely chapter. I like that Eileen and Hermione are bonding... sort of. And I'm curious to know how Snape found out the marriage bit. On to the next chapter, then.
| DragonflyXxXDancer chapter 2 . 2/18/2011
Ooh, interesting twist you have made with the Deathly Hallows and this story. I like it.
The funeral was touching. I think you captured the emotions beautifully.
I also liked the scene involving the trio and Bill. I could totally see Ron behaving that way. And a very interesting ending to this chapter...
I'm excited to read more.
| DragonflyXxXDancer chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Wow, an excellent first chapter!
I found it to be dramatic and suspenseful, it has definitely made me want to read more.
I loved the descriptions of the magic and I like how you've added extracts from the Deathly Hallows book.
| Rameelia chapter 4 . 2/18/2011
I liked this chapter. It was quite light-hearted and I laughed out loud in places where Snape was treated like a little boy by his mum. But that's what mothers should do, shouldn't they? :) It was a nice change after all that drama and angsting in the previous chapters.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
| Rameelia chapter 3 . 2/18/2011
Terrific chapter. I'm beginning to like the role Bill plays in this, and it was sort of funny seeing him, rather than Ron, get angry with Hermione. And the ending of this chappie had me on the edge of my seat. You've really got a knack for suspense, you know.
| Rameelia chapter 2 . 2/18/2011
Oh. Wow. Talk about nasty surprises... I'm sort of hoping Ron will fly off the handle in the next chap. I'm all for drama and angst, you know. :) Talking of which, I loved the scene by Snape's grave. It was touching and bittersweet and just right. I did have my doubts, however, about Bill and Remus being let in on Snape's true role in the war, but then, I guess, it kind of sounds like a thing (or rather, well-calculated precaution) Dumbledore would do.
Very interesting chapter.
| Rameelia chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Oh, very nice beginning. It's dark and dramatic, and has certainly got me intrigued. I was a little shocked at the second part of the chapter, as far as Hermione's feelings go, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see if my questions are answered.
| roslintower chapter 10 . 2/14/2011
So sweet...I liked how you built up to the fact that Abigail has a crush on Teddy.
| roslintower chapter 9 . 2/14/2011
Great chapter. The bond between Severus and Ben was really cute. Well done!
| roslintower chapter 8 . 2/13/2011
So sweet...the scene with the mistletoe was funny.
| roslintower chapter 7 . 2/13/2011
It was smart how you twisted Severus' death for your story. Another great chapter!