|Reviews for Embitterment|
| MaeveMonster chapter 17 . 2/19
THIS IS SO AMAZING. It's literally one of the best things I've ever read. Bravo! I am about to look at your other stories, because I want more!
| Vitamins chapter 17 . 3/23/2013
And then I proceeded to cry as I realized I had finally finished reading the last chapter of the fanfic. Three syllables. Breathtaking. Absolutely beautifully breathtaking. This fanfic was just a wonderful read and I just couldn't have asked for a better Yuffie/Reno fanfiction. I seriously hope you consider writing more of this pairing as you portrayed both characters so drastically well. Please from one fan to the next.
| epitaphed chapter 12 . 10/24/2012
I had hoped when you said a little CidxYuffie it wouldn't get to this but ah, tbh I got pretty annoyed. Nothing against the pairing and all but if I wanted to read CidxYuffie I wouldn't have looked for it in a RenoxYuffie one. It's not like I can just skip over it as it's part of the plot. Sorry, just have a lot of feelings.
| fhclause chapter 17 . 4/23/2012
Freaking awesome fic! You stayed true to the character I feel like love, hug and kiss you at the same time! I wish you write more YuffiexReno fic.
| no-longer-in-use-101 chapter 17 . 1/29/2012
Oh my goodness this was just awesome, like really really awesome! I don't think I could tell you how much I was smiling at the end, I was like the freaking Cheshire cat! This is definitely going in my favourites! :D
| XxFearTheFluffxX chapter 17 . 10/26/2011
Aww that was such a fantastic story! Gotta admit, I wasn't sure of the RenoxYuffie pairing and when I started reading your story it was a bit of a stretch for me, but I was pleasantly surprised. :)
Superbly well written, everyone in character, twisty and original storyline... I don't think there was anything 'Embitterment' DIDN'T have. I especially loved your descriptions - some of the most amzingly detailed and poetic I've ever had the joy of reading, and I honestly mean that. I could see your story unfold as clearly in my mind as if it were a movie.
Well done on writing such a brilliant fic. I loved every word.
| oonagi chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
It's so very hard to find a good fic about a non-canon couple, but you've restored my faith :) this is an amazing piece, thank you!
| KazeCat chapter 15 . 9/12/2011
I've a soft spot for CidxYuffie, but even though I really enjoyed Ain't Like I Planned a while ago, it didn't fully convince me for the pairing (too sudden - too less reasoning - too much on the physical side). Yet funny, even though this is a Reffie and it feels like one constantly, those last few chapters might've sent me over the edge to the CidYuffie-ship. I love the undeniable symbiosis you talked about, and I like the feel to it. I guess now I also appreciate Enkida's work more.
On the other hand - I'm not convinced about Reffie itself yet. It makes love feel like a terrible disease (...and maybe it is), but I really like the dynamics between them and how the chapters with them together seem to take everything on a weird, but lighter note...
The drama is still hardly bearable, though. I'm excited to read the rest now.
| KazeCat chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
Well, I honestly don't know what to think about the Turks. I know that Reno dropped the plate in the original game and I know that his appearance in AC has hardly any resemblance to the one in VII, but the Turks were never really portrayed as 'evil', they were even already used as some kind of comic relief in the game, which is weird considering what they did.
So personally, I wouldn't picture Reno as dark and broken as you did, even though it kinda makes sense especially for this story. It's just confusing to see people who killed so many others in one picture with some who obliviously walk over a flower field or gossip over their comrades' relationships.
But as I said, it fits here, especially harmonizing with your amazing writing style.
| Fallen-Yuki chapter 12 . 8/27/2011
This chapter was super sad. Verge of tears sad.
| Fallen-Yuki chapter 6 . 8/27/2011
Your writing has an eloquence. It's interesting and amazing. Really.
| Fallen-Yuki chapter 5 . 8/27/2011
Part of me says yay and part of me says this is foreboding and awful. Something bad will happen. It always does.
| Fallen-Yuki chapter 4 . 8/27/2011
Thoroughly enjoying this story!
| Fallen-Yuki chapter 3 . 8/27/2011
I love this chapter. I've been wanting to read a Reno and Yuffie but it's so frustrating to start a story get 4 chapters in and find that it sucks. I like this one though. You have all the aspects of Yuffie being childish without it feeling like pedophilia and all the goofy aspects of Reno but he's still dangerous and a Turk. Looking forward to reading the rest!
| Nerumi Honne chapter 3 . 8/13/2011
You made me love writing