Reviews for Retribution
AmyTheTimelord chapter 15 . 12/30/2013
This whole fic was amazing! Off to read the sequel now! Well done :D
AmyTheTimelord chapter 12 . 12/30/2013
Omg! This is so good! :D I love it! :D
AmyTheTimelord chapter 5 . 12/30/2013
Awh, I love protective Allan :D Great writing also! Will be reading more of your fics!
ClaireHood chapter 15 . 1/2/2011
can you link me to the sequal :)
Keiri Bradon chapter 15 . 6/9/2008
Yeah...I know this story is already finished...

I just found it yesterday actaully. I wish I had found it sooner. It's a great story, one that hasn't been used before, if at all. I love the Cassie/Allan friendship - it's so sweet. I love that the story is not full of Mary-sues...even with the tiny little OCs, like Farrell and Cam - they all had their flaws. I wish I had found this sooner so I would've been able to leave reviews after each update. It's kind of useless reviewing now - the sotry's complete, I doubt you'll change it because of my reviews. But, you know, if you want me to, I'll go back and review evey chapter...if you want :)

This truly is an amazing story. You are an excellent writer with a great imagination. Continue to write great stories and I'll continue to read them.

Keep up the good work.

-Keiri
pallis chapter 15 . 5/9/2008
That truly was great! It dont think it was too OOC at all. I read the whole story at once and was impressed that it wasnt boring, too long or written in a way that makes you wanna stop reading the whole story :)

"Not being funny," i think you have a wonderful way of describing things as well as emotions without getting too much detail in or making it melodramatic.

I also really like Cassie, although I had to get used to the name, but "Cass" sounds kinda cool.

My favourite part is when Allan tickles her, and I really like that you basically keep the romance on a subtle level there. (like no kissing in the wrong moments... *g*)

And of course I absolutely LOVE your ending. Part of me things it would be okay without a sequel (bittersweet reality *hehe*) but another part of me just wants Allan to be happy, everything else would be a terrible waste, right?

Which means I cant wait for the sequel!

But please dont make it too fluffy or just concentrate on their love story. Your plot is way too good for that.

And maybe someone for Much? :) Doesnt he deserve to be loved as well?

Cant wait to see what you come up with!
Biancaneve chapter 15 . 5/1/2008
Oh, I'm so glad I didn't come across this story while it was still a work-in-progress... This way I get to enjoy the great story without getting driven nuts by the suspense!

I really like the (slightly unconventional) choice you've made in NOT having Cassie jump straight into Allan's arms in the end. (Well, technically she did, when they rescued her, but metaphorically you know what I mean!) I assume that's getting saved for the sequel, but still it's a really interesting way to show that Allan is still paying the price for his betrayal.

On a random note, I love Much and the birdcalls!

Sequel soon please!
gatewatcher chapter 15 . 5/1/2008
Poor Allan. I hope she forgives him in the sequel!

Nice job! Lana
teawithsilk chapter 15 . 5/1/2008
This has been one of my favs! You wrote it so well and the plot is great :) Excellent fic!

Poor Allan! I would've been mad about him being a traitor, but since the topless scene in the series I kind of can't lol. I hope to read the sequel soon!
emelye14283 chapter 15 . 5/1/2008
Amazing job. And I like your OC, too. She's not too sappy and not too unbelievable. Very good writing! Can't wait for the sequel!
gatewatcher chapter 14 . 4/30/2008
She is such a brave girl! Very clever. Straight into Allan's arms... hm. Update! Lana
teawithsilk chapter 14 . 4/30/2008
:p I hate Sloane! I loved the ending Allan/Cassie bit, it was so sweet aw! And now I despise Cam. Very well written and very good, harllett!
gatewatcher chapter 12 . 4/29/2008
I hope Cass gets that little slimeball!
teawithsilk chapter 12 . 4/29/2008
*slaps Cam across face* BAD! *slaps Much across face* MORON! yay for Allan saying that he loves Cassie! :D I was right! I'm loving the Allan angstiness here!
gatewatcher chapter 11 . 4/28/2008
I hope Cassie forgives him. ( after they rescue her )
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