|Reviews for Two parts make one|
| guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
I love the yin and yang part. Awesome
| Lady Emma Wentworth chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
I really like reading you - you pack a great story into each piece of your fiction. Granted, Ive only read WWW Blish and this one, so far, but I've found something to think about in each one.
That said, tell me why you phrased the sentence this way:
"I will be your Yang WHEN you are my Yin."
Why not 'because you are', or 'since you are', or even 'your Yang forever.' Using the word WHEN makes it sound as if a) Jack doesn't really elieve Ianto's there it - it's a challenge - when you're finally my Yin, then I'll be your Yang; or b) it's a temporary thing - like, if I see you wearing the necklace and I know you're being my Yin that morning, I'll put mine on and we'll play twinsies.
It just strikes me as such a wishy-washy way of responding to what is obviously to Ianto such a big deal; the declaration of love isn't a game to Ianto, and as you've said in your story, Walls, Jacks been hurt & betrayed enough in his lifetime that he doesnt just bandy the word 'love' about, so for him to say it back to Ianto now is a really big deal.
It just strikes me as a really peculiar turn of phrase, that's all.
| The Scarlet Pumpernickel 2.0 chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
That is so cute, I normally perfer smut but this time its nice to read something that just makes me happy and this has really cheered me up.
| Francine S chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
aww, too cute, love it, aww, love owen and rhys less than enthusiastic response
| WeevilRockYou chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
love this story it is wonderfully fluffy!
| CheesyFace chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
quite fluffy, was good overall but maybe a tad less fluffy than it is :-)
| hotflower901 chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Totally made me smile
| butterfly.cell chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
that was awesome, great work!
| sleipnirfenris chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
AW THAT'S SWEET! XDXDXDXD glad to see people aren't giving up on the pairing!
| Faramirlover chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Yan's his yin. Lol. Love this. :)
| DudeYouJustTotallyStoleMyCar chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
omg all i read was the last line and..
I LOVE U 4 WRITTIN IT a
aw its so sweet x
| bacchae chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Very mushy...Love it...
Thanks for sharing...
| Tigerdust chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
I am smiling so hard now.
Thanks for the Janto fluff.
Made my day.
| emeraldsage85 chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Thanks for writing this. I was in the mood for some good fluff!