Reviews for Fall to Peices
MaGgIeIsAsTaR chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
Awww... It made me cry. You should make a sequel. I love your stories!
000 chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
Aw... i love this stuff.
Armygirl0604 chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
OOH! You should do another chapter, just one, from Fang's POV! That would be so cool!


If you don't want to, I will...

shyyyyxoxo chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
that was REALLY god!
speekTheeofDevil chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
I really like this song too! and that was really depressing to read. But listening to the song made it a little better...
truepinay13 chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
awe so sad :'(

i love it tho!
kaye chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
It was kind of depressing, but it was actually pretty good.
Mkitkat chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
Wow... That was slightly depreesing but good. DOes that make sense? it was good and depressing? Its just like the titanic! Good and sad... Whoe
PenBlender chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Aww... Can I suggest Hurt/Comfort/Romance for the genre? It's all sweet...
Something-I-Call-Personality chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Oh wow.

I really liked that, it's really good.

A sequel with Fang's thoughts would be quite cool...hint hint

Just Kidding.

It's really good, and a cool song.
lozzysinit chapter 1 . 4/4/2008

Please Continue This!

Please Please Please?

XD Its Real Sweet.

Laura x
Flyer without Wings chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
That was really sweet. I didn't mind the song fic at all, and that was really cool.
Cupid's Jinx chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Aww! V! That was adorabubble!

I love it!

You should totally write more song fics!

Queen of the Mary Sue chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
nice... you should pull this into an actual fic... like... say if fang WASN'T sleeping when she said that... maybe he was awake... and maybe he feels the same... and then max gets captured by Itex and they do something horrible to her and she can't stand to be touched by anyone and...


Okay... I'll shut up now... Hm... Maybe -I- should go write that... lol!
Hackd2 chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Firstly - It would be nice if you spelt the name of the song right.

Secondly - a songfic is not a song with a little bit of fic, it's a fic with a little bit of song. Since yours has more song than it does of anything substantial - we'd say that this isn't a song fic.

What, pray tell is a computer friendless Fang? Because We have this image of a robot saying 'I am fang. I have no friends.' on repeating loop.

Would Fang - as in Fang from the books, you know, the one you're supposed to be writing about - yell and wave his arms? No. We didn't think so either.

Yours, The FicSquad.