Reviews for watermelon seeds
NerdyNel chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Like all of your pieces, wonderful. There is an incredibly natural feel to the dialogue that sweeps you along through the piece. The bits Momo deliberately leave out say so very much.
trishika chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
this is a really poignant fic. their interactions are spot-on, and i loved how you captured that slightly uncomfortable feel between them.