Reviews for The Yamani Knight Trilogy, Part 1: Assassin
Dom-Loves-Kel chapter 38 . 6/6/2010
hey just read this series ! the short chapters were a nice surprise after all the long ones you find here on FF.

loved the plot can't wait to read the sequel :D
Silvermoon of Forestclan chapter 38 . 10/5/2009
Loved the story!

-Silvermoon
Taeniaea chapter 35 . 6/28/2009
great story
Escape my reality chapter 29 . 5/31/2009
wow. that was evil
Escape my reality chapter 26 . 5/31/2009
ok. good story, just next time maybe wait another 2 years or so before they marry. i mean she's 14!
xDarklightx chapter 38 . 5/27/2009
I really enjoyed reading this story. I plan on reading the sequel when I get the time.
Louise chapter 15 . 5/23/2009
Hey. Love your story by the way. But why not call kel something like Rose (pretty but sharp) instead of Kraken?
Heart89 chapter 16 . 1/26/2009
I think it would be better to go back and condense the chapters tog. It gets annoying to read such short chatpers one after another. You could condense maybe three or more together and get a better chapter lenght
MidnightsRose chapter 37 . 8/23/2008
this is an amazing fic!
lunarmidnightwolf chapter 37 . 8/7/2008
i am glad your working on this and i was very happy to read it, it was very interesting and i wish you luck in your writting
ixmissxmyxmind chapter 32 . 8/6/2008
I love it!
ixmissxmyxmind chapter 31 . 8/6/2008
I love it!
ixmissxmyxmind chapter 30 . 8/6/2008
I love it!
ixmissxmyxmind chapter 29 . 8/6/2008
I love it!
ixmissxmyxmind chapter 28 . 8/6/2008
I love it!
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