Reviews for Ever After
reader chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
I feel a sense of fulfillment! I love this! Thank you!
yume girl 91 chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
C: I like this, if only Re-L would've said something like that at the end of the series...
omgpink chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
ohh this realxvincent story was sooo funny! I really liked it! I like your simple style too!
Vincent Law chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
It's really great! But I kind of feel like if you were the dramatize the kiss and Vincent's reaction (shock, heart-attack, etc) it would be even better. ;)
K0USAGI chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Aww, this was really sweet!
reaper with no name chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Hm...I'm so torn on this one.

On the one hand, it could have been better written. The ending seemed a little sudden. The characterization and concept were nice, though. Re-l's very specific observations were a nice touch.

All that said, however, the fact that it's a Vincent/Re-l fic that's cute and fluffy and completed means I automatically have to love it.

So, to summarize, could have been a little better, but I really like it regardless.
annubis chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
i usually dont read oneshots, but there's so few ergo proxy fanfictions on here! but something caught my eye about yours and i got to say, you really nailed Real on this one. It's exactly how dry and sarcastic you'd expect her to be! very well done on the characterization! now I'm gonna hafta give ergo proxy a try, beefen up this section of fanfiction!
marufu-chan chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
man that was corny in a way lol very cute story! n.n
iAmAnDaLwAySwIlLbE chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
This is the first Ergo Proxy story i've read yet and I like it! It was adorable! (hope you don't find that offensive!)

You should do a full continung story for Ergo proxy!
Atsu Tenshi chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Aw this is just so sweet. I love it! Makes my heart flutters at the end of the story. And Pino is an absolute adorable!
Frank Wolf chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
nice! cute and too the point... maybe y'know kill the I's and It's... since it's in first person, I know it's easier to write it this way or maybe it's what you were going for? but I honestly liked it... it had that same dry atmosphere the anime had! anyway keep up the good work!

P.S will you write more? i know it's a one-shot but i can't help but feel it!
alighthawk chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
I just finished watching the series and while I;m still confused about certain parts, you seem to catch their characterization well, especially Pino. Well Done.
Blonde-Existentialist chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Haha, this is pretty adorable. Although I can see the ending being just as much her being honest as her messing with Vincent's mind, the latter actually more likely. But its a fun piece and I really hope you write more EP fiction!
Alana84 chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Nice one-shot, cute!
kuro's girl chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
You did a good job keeping Re-l and Vincent in character.