Reviews for Two Strikes
Nana Walker chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
OMG! I had to wait a lot of time for read this, because I didn't know English language. I love this pairing and this story is so cute. Thank you very much

Sorry for my English, it's too hard for me write in this language, yet.
Carolinefdq chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
Omg this was so beautifully written!
Flocon de Neige chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
OMG this is so cute!
Danyeda Goofy Panterita chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Really cute story. I like it a lot. Thanks for writing this -
FireyFlames chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Kudos to you for writing this pairing and making it work. Lou Fa is my favorite and I really loved the way you wrote her.

Instant fav.
silverfire113 chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
cute
Le Requiem chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
aw! That's so cute! I really like your writing style! Awsome, awsome, AWSOME oneshot!
aya2aya3 chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
wow, that was beautiful...

by the way, i actually have proof that lavi likes lenalee. but i can't post a link here, so email me at poochie2poochie33

i also have tons of gorgouse fanarts of them that can maybe inspire you more to write if ya want ;)
Ghostpulse chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
ok! really good! hmm. my favorite part was totally when lavi said 'we are all mere drops of ink on the pages of time'. SUCH a cool saying. i love it! i wanna see the next chapter!
Hola gurl chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
There should be more of Allen/Lou fa's around. I love Allen/Fou too. Care to make one? These asian branch gurlies are not appreciated enough. T_T