Reviews for Brown Eyed Girl
F Maurice chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Lexie-H chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
I love the song, and I love what you've done with this story. Ron's voice is very strong, and seeing Hermione through his eyes is a fantastic experience.

I do want to point out your punctuation of dialogue, which needs a little work - it should go last word, period, quotation mark ("Like this.") instead of last word, quotation mark, period ("like this",)

Regardless, beautiful story. Especially love the paragraph about him proposing on a Wednesday. It's lovely he remembers and savours the little details )

CowahBull chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
OMG I LOVE IT! I really ahve nothing else to say..I did notice some typos but I shouldn't be talking! I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
Rosalie Weasley chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
that was so amazing!

i loved it and you wrote the characters very well!

brilliant story!
mustardgirl1128 chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Aww! Fluffity fluffington (Thanks to Morning. xx for those 2 words...check her out)! I love it! It was SO sweet! And the song fit very well! So cute! Good job!
Garima chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Jenny you really do write beautifully.

this was just perfect. it really was.
Elledreamer chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Oh yay I love Ron/Hermione! This was so perfect. I loved the bit -

My beautiful, clever girl.

My fiancée.

My Hermione.

Really touching. I thought you got Ron just right too :p it just felt like it was him!

Really well done. Speak to you soon,

Elle xx