|Reviews for Brown Eyed Girl|
| F Maurice chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
| Lexie-H chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
I love the song, and I love what you've done with this story. Ron's voice is very strong, and seeing Hermione through his eyes is a fantastic experience.
I do want to point out your punctuation of dialogue, which needs a little work - it should go last word, period, quotation mark ("Like this.") instead of last word, quotation mark, period ("like this",)
Regardless, beautiful story. Especially love the paragraph about him proposing on a Wednesday. It's lovely he remembers and savours the little details )
| CowahBull chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
OMG I LOVE IT! I really ahve nothing else to say..I did notice some typos but I shouldn't be talking! I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
| Rosalie Weasley chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
that was so amazing!
i loved it and you wrote the characters very well!
| mustardgirl1128 chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Aww! Fluffity fluffington (Thanks to Morning. xx for those 2 words...check her out)! I love it! It was SO sweet! And the song fit very well! So cute! Good job!
| Garima chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Jenny you really do write beautifully.
this was just perfect. it really was.
| Elledreamer chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Oh yay I love Ron/Hermione! This was so perfect. I loved the bit -
My beautiful, clever girl.
Really touching. I thought you got Ron just right too :p it just felt like it was him!
Really well done. Speak to you soon,