|Reviews for Smile Takkun!|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Cute cant even begin to describe this story, keep up the good work! :)
| AnAddictedReader chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Short but sweet.
| Composingjealousy chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
| muchoblidged chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
I didn't think Naota's dad was a drunk...
| tasty cheez chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Naota merely rolled his eyes and laid down on the grass closing his eyes.
efore walking over to him and sitting next to him.
lines like these don't sound very well. You should have wrote something like. "Naota merely rolled his eyes and laid down on the grass closing THEM" subtle, but it flows better.
Keep writing. Your shaping up to be a good author you just need to proof read a little more, and maybe watch the show again. I hope to see great things from you in the future.