|Reviews for A Demon's Lust and Love|
| The Wandering Plant chapter 1 . 10/5
Ï refuse to emit it.. wtf?
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/25
it went too fast specially in the beginning isnt inuyasha supposed to ask sesshomaru why di he save him or something of that sort ? and i got confused considering the pov sometimes u d use the third person point of you and sometimes i d use inuyasha s point of u wich is kind of unsetelling beacuse i have to go back and reread the whole thing thinking that i might have missed something
| Zena McClain chapter 1 . 5/18
Please CONTENUE THIS STORY.
| Rin2015 chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
O.O hello NOTHER CHAPTER !
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
That was soooo CUTE!and very well done.
| Eyea chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Oh geez -my favorite couple. Sorta please write another chapter it will be so Kawaii! Arigato!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
Really wonderful story, just wished that it went longer, would have loved to read more about Sesshomaru getting it on with InuYasha. Hope there is more to come. Keep up the great job of writing hot stories about the brothers.
| Whimsical Doodles chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
This is pure sweetness with these two brothers.
| Nychell21 chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
Oooohhh(fangirl0.0)!*.*(total state of shock)
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
It was wonderful
| UtaMiyako chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
w DAMN! SO SEXY! x3
| dragonshanan1 chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
| yaoilover6 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
sesshy is so one tracked minded right now
| ZucchiniBiscuits chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Alright, so Hello there! I didn't read your entire story; mainly because of the way it was written. I'm just reviewing to point out a small thing.
A kimono is a dress. Dudes didn't wear them unless they were confused or adventurous. What you're thinking of is a Shitagi and Hakuma- both of which are worn by Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. The Robe of the Fire Rat is a Haori, and is kind of like an overcoat. The pretty little fur scarf Sesshomaru wears is called hilarious-looking.
Just thought I'd clear that up.
Also, you should really put more research into your writing; I could tell this was one of your first times writing Edo-era AND sexxxxxxxx. Sorry for the harshness of my review.
Typo in the second to last Sess-dialogue: Change 'emit' to 'admit'.
| ardentes chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
The ending of the story was kind of cheesy, and then you go from Sesshomaru licking his fingers but not using them, and just thrusting his cock into Inuyasha. Besides those two qualms, I really enjoyed the story!