Reviews for I Made My Choice
Tris Uchiha chapter 2 . 12/21/2010
CHPrime chapter 21 . 11/23/2010
This is great. Really great. Judai is given a realistic deck and personality to reflect the repercussions of managing to keep Yubel with him during his childhood. logical mind, no fun and games just play when necessary, and somewhat sadistic. All of it was well portrayed, especially sadism seen in his run in with Blair. very good story, please continue were you left off from. We know you’re not dead!
youdon'tknow chapter 21 . 10/1/2010
I know some authors on this site may not update a story for over a year (which it has been), but I think some of us would like to make sure that you haven't quit on this story. I can understand that you may be too busy or simply have writers block, but can you at least give an author's note on whether or not you will continue this eventually?
TheDeviantKnight chapter 21 . 9/15/2010
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kyuubi shadow chapter 21 . 8/24/2010
... wow. What a great story
prettygirl101 chapter 21 . 4/17/2010
why wont you update this story is amazing
1WiththeButterfly chapter 21 . 3/2/2010
wow, a good 6 months since this has been updated.

I hope you didn't drop it, that would've sucked. when kickass fics like this die, butterflies slaughter thousands. you know what they say, when a butterfly beats its wings, an axe-wielding psycopath comes to your doorstep P

so, please update soon.

i'm willing to offer internet hugs? no? alright then
One Winged Angel chapter 21 . 2/6/2010
“The spirit that sleeps within, Haou, is indeed destined to save the universe from destruction, but I am not protecting him till he is ready. He was ready long ago. The person I was destined to protect wasn’t the charming prince I knew in a past and gave my life for. If it had been I wouldn’t have failed in my task. No, the person I was destined to protect and love for all eternity was you, Jaden.” Yubel spoke with such a tone that Jaden believed her instantly, nothing but truth laced her words and he could already she the first signs of tears appearing in her eyes, evidently there was still some residual energy caused by the Shadow Game he had conducted with Nightshroud about her being, giving her power enough to manifest in the physical world. Not enough to touch him however.

Does this mean that she loves the current Jaden more than his past self?

It would be cool for some slight Alexis x Jaden hints at one point, just to tease people maybe and it would add a intresting dynamic.

I'm looking forward to the fiance episode.

Jaden should befriend atleast one more person and open up some more, because at the end of season three all the people in the show were friends, I presume your sticking to the canon on basic things like that.

Jaden will have to learn to duel better to be able to match Zane's dueling skills later on. :)
Phantom Miria38719 chapter 21 . 1/12/2010
OMG can u please keep me posted and i think ur dramatic scene was done really well. i am a yubel fan and want to tear out her throught for wat she did to yubel oh and 5/5 story and wat are the names of the 3 yubel not in space stories i like them.

great story keep me posted:)
Celestia1001 chapter 12 . 1/11/2010
Noticed you mentioned Jesse.

I'd wonder how he and Jaden would get along? XD

Will he come into the story like in season 3? or will he be introduced earlier?
dragonman.NET chapter 21 . 12/26/2009
Great story

Please you have to update it.

I also wonder when you are going to show Yubel's other forms.
ZhaneX chapter 13 . 12/22/2009
Awesome story! I haven't had a chance to read chapter 13 yet, but so far the first 12 have been great! It's a really great idea, an AU where Jaden never sent Yubel away, brilliant!

Also I'm kinda freaked out by how similar Jaden's Dark deck is to mine...also, I'm surprised no one's used Forbidden Chalice against him yet, that card could shut Yubel down instantly...then again, I'm only on Chapter 13.

Great story, 5/5!
Kari Akiyama chapter 21 . 11/28/2009
I really hope that you update soon; it's really hard to find a good Judai/Yubel fic. Just read through the entire fic throughout this month and it's going to take some adjusting to not having the next chapter readily available. please update soon, because i do so love this fic.
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