Reviews for when the sand runs out
brtt64 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Good story, but could you sort out the use of the word

THEN and THAN? Also the word ALLY (a narrow lane between

buildings) and ALLIE (comrad or partner).

Other than that I found your stories a good read (I've read 4

so far)and I hope to read more soon!

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
LilPadfootChicky chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
same as last revew ah