|Reviews for Hiccups|
| Angel Lawliet chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
I found it absolutly hilarious XD Your awesome and funny!
| Storygirl95 chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
Lol that's funny! Only stabbing and maiming him will work! I wasn't a horrible attempt at all! And I love akatsuki baby too :) good job!
| raginrad77 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
haha hilarious i read it three times!
| Kionkitchee chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
That's so funny! 3
I can't help laughing through the story!
| Chiharu Hoshizora chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Ya know, I have always LOVED this story. If the image of a hiccuping Pein wasn't enough, Tobi's silliness makes it awesomer!
| Hyper-Blossom Z chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
HAHAA! maybe Tobi wanted to make a sand castle with Naruto-kun...
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! LOL X 90! Kisame was eating a tuna sandwich (Kisame is a fish...)
WILL pein KEEP HICCUPING FOR ALL ETERNITY?
| Blond Suicidal Bomber chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
| Midnightxwolfx chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
LAWL! I love it! Would Danna have hiccups? He's a puppet after all.
Itachi didn't give a suggestion ._.
"I'll fix this. My mom used to do this to me all the time."
-chokes and dies of laughter-
| Randzsa chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
XD all of the characters shew their speciality XD lmao!
that was awesome!
| Rainhealsme chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
That was a great story. too bad for Pein though...
| INUcarrot1 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
haha i thought this was funny! well then again anything is funny at 1 in the morning, right? well any way it was good! [:
| my friend chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
He watched as Kisame took a large bite out of his tuna sandwich and looked on curiously as Itachi stared blankly at something in front of him. Silly near-blind Uchiha...XD KISAME EATING A FISH XD
why does everyone think that Eetchi is blind?
(oh yeah...I AM NOT A STALKER! i found you from my friend meichan. i used to review under lonewolfmasternic, so yeah.)
"You have the hiccups!" Tobi exclaimed, jumping out of his seat and throwing his arms in the air. "Hooray!"...XD TOBI IS A GOOD BOY, AND KNOWS OBVIOUS THINGS!
There was a loud explosion behind Pein. He turned around, meeting Deidara's grinning face. The young terrorist held a birdie-bomb in his face-up palm. The little bird flew above Pein's head and exloded with a large BANG...hee. Dei is good. real good. that was...FUNNY!
"That's just...gross," Hidan said.
"Tobi knows! Tobi knows! Tobi knows!"
"What-hic-is it, Tobi?"
"Tobi is a good boy."...THAT IS WHAT I SAID TOBI!
| Mei-chan4 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Yay! You did it! I loved it . I wouldn't have drank water that Kisame vomited either. That's disgusting.
| Wah-Keetcha chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
One (IM lingo word) LMAO. That was cute as hell my friend. Nice job. LOL You had me a smiling and even laughing. LOL.
| mountainderp chapter 1 . 3/13/2008