|Reviews for Sun Son|
| Winged Monkey chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
That was very cute, Laffatgravity. Me likeys!
| Reinbeauchaser chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
The scope of your writing is far and above the quality of most writers here. Given the fact that you say your age is under 20 years speaks volumes to your natural ability to weave a tale, as well as to how effective your teachers were in schooling you.
This was wonderful. It was well written and poignant, and the line - “The difference, my son, is that you shine far brighter.” was brilliant!
I also enjoyed the toddler-speak! So very cute, so very cuddly. The 'awe' factor hit the stratosphere with me. :0)
Excellent work and to my fav and C2 file it goes.
| ChibiLover123 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
I thought so...Good job, by the way.
| KriStALKaLEi chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
I'm gonna fave it here too 'cause I loved it so much :D
| FF Demon chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Simple and beautiful.
“The difference, my son, is that you shine far brighter.” That sentence bring tear in my eyes, so cute.
| wlk68 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
This was really cute. I know some people don't but I actually enjoy these types of chibi turtle stories. It's nice to get a glimpse of the turtles' early days and how Splinter, still new to the situation himself, deals with being a father of 4 very curious and hyperactive kids. Keep up the good work.