Reviews for stillborn in the morning sun
ewriter chapter 2 . 5/13/2008
OMG, This is so sad, I was crying.
EternalConfusion chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
This has been pretty sad so far, but incredibly well written. Well done - I like hwo the style is really different to everythign else out there.
MadeOfStars chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
This is so intense, it is almost hard to read. I imagine it was tough to write as well. It is gut-wrenching and emotional and a beautiful way to tell a story. I am impressed by your style and choice of material (though, to be honest, I do look forward to sunnier times for them).
Laby Anne Boleyn chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
WOW!
Laby Anne Boleyn chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
WOW, sad, but powerful!
willgirl chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Very sad, but extremely powerful and moving. Good job!
only-more-love chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
This is fabulous.

The green swing doors batter the air as she disappears back into the safety of the ward.

I couldn't tell you why, but that was my favorite sentence.

One question for you - what is the "dented, tarnished lump of lead" Brennan finds in Sully's body bag? I know I'm missing something, and it's driving me crazy.
Lu78 chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
This was a very powerful piece of writing. Can't wait to read more of it.
starbuckfaerie21 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
This was very sad but well written!
iamwriter chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
That was powerful. I hope you will continue.