Reviews for One Step
palmtreehead chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
Man, I am now a mother of two and this sort of story kills me, so horrible to make a choice like that. Very well written.
LadyoftheShield chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
beautiful.
Niabi chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Pretty good. I liked the continuous use of the phrase "one step"; it seemed to, well, tie the whole story together, I suppose.

The tone was haunting, too. Nicely done, that. You really gotta feel sorry for Minato, being forced to make such a terrible decision.

Anyhoo, good job on this one-shot.
meatballs in the impala chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Aww it's awesome T-T I simply loved it!
Arashi-Kumo chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
TT_TT Wow, this was great.
DetoxAngel chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
This story is like, freaking perfection, how come it only has two reviews? The injustice!
Jigglypuff chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
This perfectly illustrate Minato's dileema and the hard choices he has to take in order to save his village, and how painful it was for him to have to seal the Kyuubi in his only son.
premiumshaday chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
beautiful