|Reviews for Critical Mass|
| KoreanMusicFan chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
what story did you read?
This story was interesting but i think i would have liked it to be just a little longer.
| Sir Gawain of Camelot chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
I'm curious. Why "Hisoka!" Was he telling Tatsumi to look after Hisoka, or telling Tatsumi to get Hisoka, or what? The first seems most likely.
Tink you may be able to tie this into your 'Tsuzuki-as-deamon-king' story? Or... No, you already have a beginning for that, don't you?
| justsimplymeagain chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
You should write more along this line or perhaps rather then have it as a oneshot you should add more chapters. But that's up to you, well done. I like it.