|Reviews for If You Go Down In The Woods|
| Rachelly chapter 4 . 8/18/2008
Wow! Just loved this! You did a fantastic job! I loved reading the story from the outsiders perspective...him summing up Dean, and Sammy, and the brother's relationship! I liked his character, the way he saw things, his perspective in learning what was really out there, how you unfolded his character from beginning to end in subtle ways...like his hair, which he had little of, being singed in the explosion. I loved how quickly you started the action, added the female in the middle, and the "kids" at the end...tons of action, angst, and more! Loved our hurt/drugged Sammy and our protective big brother Dean...and then the reversal! Both brothers are fiercely protective of each other, both willing to die for each other, both very strong in character and you portrayed that beautifully! Great read! Well done! Thanks for sharing your creative genius with us! Rachelly
| CaiiWinchester chapter 4 . 5/8/2008
That was a really good idea. I loved the way it was told from someone elses point of view...And I loved the little reference to Jus in Bello as well ;D
| gidgetgal9 chapter 4 . 5/6/2008
Liz- loved this one too! I love to read great SPN stories with an outsiders pov - and this one kicked ass. I like that the elderly outsider kicked butt too! What a hoot. :0) Claudia
| THEvampireninja chapter 4 . 4/29/2008
"what must have been the most intense ten minutes of hand staring known to man finally, Dean’s thumb twitched - a little." MUAHAHAHA That is hysterical
| Enkidu07 chapter 4 . 4/20/2008
AMAZING. Left me a little sad though. So neat to get an outsiders perspective. Especially such a cool character as that. I think i will go back and reread - earlier chapters kept making me chuckle and I need levity before i can go to sleep. wonderful story!
| sidjack chapter 4 . 4/7/2008
I loved every minute! Great character of the Old Timer. Hurt/Adventure, wondertul mix, and the ending was just fine.
Cannot wait to read more.
| sendintheclowns chapter 4 . 4/2/2008
I love how you're able to make both brothers sarcastic: “Dean, you can’t move your arms or legs. What are you going to do, blink them to death?” Hee!
I like the ending. Especially how the explosion in your story parallels the explosion at the police station in Jus in Bello.
| SilentLaurel chapter 4 . 4/2/2008
Not bad. I do like outsider point-of-view. The ending is fine.
| supernaturalsammy67 chapter 4 . 4/1/2008
writing an ending never comes easy for you eh?
then what are you! some kind of godly kripke creature that can make any mumbled letters and words turn into A* perfection people would pay for in TONNES!
cos OMG HUN!...just OH MY LORD!
im not religious but im starting to think you are a god hun, cos that ending was absoliutley hands down the BEST bloody ending and the best summing up of 1st hand account dude that had the experience to meet the brothers...its just amazing hun!
never comes easy eh...well that is a masterpeice and thats just the ending!
AW i love the old guy now! haha
i dunno why but i wanna give him a huge hug for letting his home go and helping them like that...then i think oh its a story its not real
but your real and your an incredible writer so i can hug you!
THANK YOU SO MUCH HUN!
OMG! you are just plain and simply AMAZING in every form and aspect, wow...
aw and he knows there alive even aftetr the explosion and with lilith...shes a freaky girl!
kinda makes you wonder...if they really are people out there like Sam and Dean saving people...and we live in ignorance
best effective impactive ending i've read EVER hun
you are 100% a millions times amazing!
thank you so much for the hard work and amazing chapter and stories you write hehe x
| Ghostwriter chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
| PADavis chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
I liked your ending. Still love the old guy, a great POV. Thanks so much for getting this out there!
| Dragonflysoul chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
Oh, I REALLY enjoyed this. Thank you!
| Thorny Hedge chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
Great ending (sniffle). Wonderful tie-in with last episode. I do love the voice of the narrator in this story.
| alwaysateen chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
I love your story!
It was fun to read it from an outsider's point of view.
I love the way he discovered the brothers through his adventure with them. :)
| sammygirl1963 chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
Wow, what an awesome story! As I read, I really got to liking that old man as he did his best to help Sam and Dean! He might have been elderly, but he sure packed a punch when it came to shooting that Kalik to save the boys!